now it's been a few years, but desperately hoping you come back to this!

More! Gosh, it's PERFECT! Feed my addiction, oh storyteller! I see that "last updated 2009" date, and I worry! I worry not to have a proper and satisfactory ending to this juicy bit of smexyness. And how disappointing would that be? No, no, no, you simply must finish this tale! Pretty please with a cherry on top?

I have loved this fic! The first one as well. I know it's been like 5 years but it would be awesome if you'd post that last stinkin chapter! lol Seriously, wonderful imagery and you are the BEST I've EVER seen at dragging out the Unresolved Sexual Tention! HOLY CRAP!

Oh my goodness, I have read this entire work of genius thus far in one night, and it is now four in the morning and it was SO WORTH IT! Pleeeease tell me the next chapter(s) is/are still coming! (I don't care how long it takes to polish them up, as long as they're coming!)

It's been some time ... I'm guessing no resolution now? :P I LOVE this and your artwork with a PASSION!

I hope you update soon! I can't wait to see the next part!

KYAA! GET YOUR BUTT BACK HERE AND PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY!
you can't leave a gal hanging like that it's unbearably *cruel*! :C

btw loved the hyped-up super smexy possessiveness and tension that's being displayed here :D

FOUR YEARS.

I don't know if you are ever going to continue this. But I hope you do. This is one of the most enjoyable lab fan fics I have ever read.

Brilliant! They agruing like a married couple and the sexual tension is astounding. So different to GND but still the perv Jareth and super stubborn Sarah XD.

I love this. Your portrayal of these two is so sweet and sexy and twisted and delicious! I hope you do add more to this some day, but I suppose for now I'll be content with the wonderfulness that is GND. Absolutely brilliant!

...has just finished with the T-shirt series so far. First: *fans self* Second: I spent most of this grinning like a lunatic, because there are a lot of funny moments scattered around, and the timing was perfect. Third: Cliffhangers have been dealt with, but now there's an actual plot, something of a driving question - namely, "What were his motivations (outside of the obvious) and how is all this going to play out?" Oh, and the roommates' reactions ought to be pretty funny, too.

...Last updated in 2009. Well, it'll get updated if/when it gets updated, and I'll be happy if/when it does. Looking forward to it. - Matsuri

I actually kind of loved the condom bit not just for the soap-boxy message goodness, but also... well, as an artistic and storytelling choice. It took this crazy wish-fulfillment fantasy story about sex with a ridiculously sexy and alluring mythical Goblin King and made it feel very real, put Sarah in a situation that I could relate to, at the moment that I least expected it. It actually drew me further into the story and into what Sarah was thinking and feeling, because it was so unexpectedly familiar.

Jareth and Sarah remind me of the song Welcome to the Jungle by Guns N Roses XD can't wait for the next chapter!

this. is. beautiful.! oh my i could reread it again and again i love how you capture sarah and his royal smexy ass smugness. and i must say im in love with your writhing style its amazing! and i implore and beg and wish to the goblin king that the next chapter will be here soon!