Someone sedate me I thought this pic was finished / crying, throwing up, screaming, ect./ fantastic work on this pic I have enjoyed it immensely I've no idea how you write all this banter but it is SO GOOD and I am SO EXCITED for the next chapter

ahahaha yes YES

ugh, I love them

OH MY GOOOOOOOOOOOOOO...

ITS HAPPENING

I love it I'm entranced I'm listening intently im

haha YES YES YES

I told myself 'just a quick read before bed'. its 1:30. I'm obsessed. oh my god.

Cannot tell you how many times I had to put the computer down to cool off and process before coming back to the story... damn

This was thrilling, the entire way through. I love it so much. I desperately hope that this continues someday, but more than that, I hope you are well and thriving. 3 Thanks for sharing your gifts

Absolutely loved it! Any chance of an update on this ? Would love to see how this ends .. wonder if Jareth can handle his inner jealousy lol

Goodness their dizzying dance of barbed words and half truths is incredible. And immensely entertaining.

Hm yes he's smirking just a little too much, as ever I suppose!

Oh goodness what a piece of writing! Amazing, hot, amusing, touching, the sentimental meaning that is, and yes funny too. It has everything. Especially brilliant is the discussion over sensible precautions. I don't think I've ever read an extended exchange such as this. Great dialogue. The implication of his jealousy was particularly delicious. Onward!

Duh duh derrrrrr. So very g!as that wasn't actually the end!