Reviews for The Tshirt incident: Retaliation & Escalation |
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![]() ![]() Someone sedate me I thought this pic was finished / crying, throwing up, screaming, ect./ fantastic work on this pic I have enjoyed it immensely I've no idea how you write all this banter but it is SO GOOD and I am SO EXCITED for the next chapter |
![]() ![]() ahahaha yes YES |
![]() ![]() ugh, I love them |
![]() ![]() OH MY GOOOOOOOOOOOOOO... |
![]() ![]() ITS HAPPENING |
![]() ![]() I love it I'm entranced I'm listening intently im |
![]() ![]() haha YES YES YES |
![]() ![]() I told myself 'just a quick read before bed'. its 1:30. I'm obsessed. oh my god. |
![]() ![]() Cannot tell you how many times I had to put the computer down to cool off and process before coming back to the story... damn |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was thrilling, the entire way through. I love it so much. I desperately hope that this continues someday, but more than that, I hope you are well and thriving. 3 Thanks for sharing your gifts |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely loved it! Any chance of an update on this ? Would love to see how this ends .. wonder if Jareth can handle his inner jealousy lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Goodness their dizzying dance of barbed words and half truths is incredible. And immensely entertaining. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hm yes he's smirking just a little too much, as ever I suppose! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh goodness what a piece of writing! Amazing, hot, amusing, touching, the sentimental meaning that is, and yes funny too. It has everything. Especially brilliant is the discussion over sensible precautions. I don't think I've ever read an extended exchange such as this. Great dialogue. The implication of his jealousy was particularly delicious. Onward! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Duh duh derrrrrr. So very g!as that wasn't actually the end! |