Reviews for Mercenaries: Desert of Fire
BearfootTruck chapter 1 . 12/17/2012
This story looks very promising! Other than minor grammatical errors, I love it!
Merchant of Menace chapter 2 . 9/25/2011
Hey, um, is this story abndoned? Because I wovld love to read the continuation of this glorious masterpeice. Anyway, keep up the good work.
Natural Born Sinner chapter 2 . 8/25/2011
I just finished the second game earlier today, and was curious if there were any fanfics for this game. I doubted it, but was happy when I found this section. Considering writing my own fanfic.

Anyways, I liked this a lot. I could picture everything perfectly in my head, and I think you captured Nilsson's character pretty well. The action was great, too.

I hope you write more of this, I would like to see where this goes!
Dark Phoenix Jake chapter 2 . 5/10/2010
Rufus Vanzant chapter 2 . 3/5/2010
very good story, not skipping on any details that may be needed or just to add affect. The one thing I noticed is you misspell Mattias' name every time you type it out. Other than the misspellings you did very well, I would give it a 9 out of 10, make the changes and you got a solid 10.
Christank91 chapter 2 . 12/22/2007
Great story, I can't wait to see what Nillson does next.
wolfofshame chapter 1 . 9/7/2007
haha, that Nillson for ya! i love it so far, keep it up!
shuriko chapter 2 . 8/11/2007
That was freakin' sweet! Mattias was always my favorite Merc in every way shape and form! Have you beaten the game at all?
Ominae chapter 2 . 6/4/2007
Not bad. So you're not using the Venezuela story, eh?