Reviews for What Should Have Been |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Please update! I love this book! |
![]() ![]() i hope you can finish this story its pretty awesome and i can't wait for the sequel |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it and please update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh this is getting UPDATE SOON ! |
![]() ![]() pretty please continue.. I am excited to read the next couple of chapters that u have for us readers.. :) |
![]() ![]() PLEASE FINISH THIS! Love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG I LOVED IT VERY MUCH. PLEASE ADD MORE SOON! |
![]() ![]() Please update! I love this story! This is EXACTLY what I was looking for! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter is great. I love how her name is still Kim but you added the -ana on it. I like how you had her tell Kat. Update soon please. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good Chapter & More Please |
![]() ![]() ![]() I totally love it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well it would seem Kat got the second shock of her life that day, the first being becoming a ranger and the second who Kimana is. I noticed one minor grammar issue. I figured since she has been hanging out with us and knows all about what we do, who better than he to take over?" the he should be her given the context and the character its discussing. As fro your question about other powers maybe one to change her look so she doesn't need to use the Ninjetti outfit while interacting with the other rangers, you already have kind of touched on it by having Kim change her voice. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome. Love it. Catch ya on the flip side. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really love this! Update soon please! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very Very Cool Story |