Reviews for An Innate Power
savanah13 chapter 1 . 5/31/2007
that was SO GREAT! it was so swet too! i think its perfect where it is! if other people tell you to keep writing dont listen to them it is PERFECT! you are a GREAT writer! ~savanah~ :)
chica-chilena chapter 1 . 5/31/2007
I loved it! It was so sweet and beautiful. You get to know Jasper in a whole other way, than you're used to, and that is really good because many people see him as evil. I hope that they understand him better now that you have written this. What more can I say? It was amazing!
Teak chapter 1 . 5/31/2007
That was a touching story. I especially loved the last paragraph. Thanks for your interpretations and insights into Jasper.
Daniela chapter 1 . 5/31/2007
I loved your story, it was really interesting the point of view of Jasper and his philosohy of instinct and love.
Nayame chapter 1 . 5/31/2007
Very, very good. I think, you got a good hold on how Jasper could have thought after the event.

And as short as he was in that story: The way you picture Emmett is good, too :)
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