Reviews for The 14th Key
Taeniaea chapter 15 . 2/15/2010
cool story
P3RFUM3 chapter 11 . 12/12/2008
EP! i luv the DRAMA!
P3RFUM3 chapter 10 . 12/12/2008
ZoMg! i luv twists like these
P3RFUM3 chapter 9 . 12/12/2008
Suspence! 0_o
P3RFUM3 chapter 8 . 12/12/2008
so cute!
P3RFUM3 chapter 7 . 12/12/2008
P3RFUM3 chapter 6 . 12/12/2008
hehe luv the ending
P3RFUM3 chapter 5 . 12/12/2008
Yaay Xed Pwns!
P3RFUM3 chapter 4 . 12/12/2008
stupid Xemnas
P3RFUM3 chapter 3 . 12/12/2008
:D nice chp
P3RFUM3 chapter 2 . 12/12/2008
last part is cute!
P3RFUM3 chapter 1 . 12/12/2008
Aww! Xed is to cute
WerewolfNobody chapter 15 . 12/28/2007
man... That's one awesome story!
watch-me-write chapter 15 . 12/3/2007
Aww, that was a sweet fic! It's sad that Xed didn't stay with Roxas, though. I knew you were going to pull something like that, but I absolutely loved the ending. It was a nice thing, you know?

Did you know that you do really good fight scenes? I mean, this one still can't top BMTL's fight scene, but it was still really cool.

We didn't get to find out why Larxene was in a bad mood, did we? I mean, you don't just get peeved off for nothing, do you? Well, I guess it's not impossible for Larxene, but really, you'd think Axel set her hair on fire for her to do something like that.

Well, overall, it was a cool fic. Why didn't anyone review until the last chapter? I mean, really, even the insanely bad fics need reviews, how are they gonna get better?

Anyway, I've still got some reading to do, love the fic and I hope you keep writing them!

Bex O
Shadylex chapter 15 . 6/18/2007
Aw I like the ending. To bad Xed had to leave, but it was funny when Xemnas found out that the weapon specialist was a girl instead of a boy. For a moment, when Xemnas was talking to her boss, I thought that he was going to get a face full of her fist if he continued. Are you going to make a sequal? Oh, and could you read my story? I need more viewers...
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