Reviews for Sugar
underhandlilies chapter 1 . 10/14/2010
AWWW! That was so awfully ADORABLE! The end made me cry...
Cheska chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
I'm seriously wondering why I never came across this! Really good story - loved it. The cliches and everything! Haha what was amusing what the sugar - Sora seriously did go next door for sugar for cookies. Lolz!

Hope you make more like it!
xxFraise chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
So. much. fluff... *0*

3 Tis wonderful~
singingstars chapter 1 . 9/7/2009
OH MY GOSH, so cuutee! 3 XD The ending made me laugh... Sora comparing Riku to cookies! :D LOL
Valentine Satiguss chapter 1 . 3/18/2008

*fangirl squeals


The overwhelming cuteness and one-shoty-ness is just so cute...

Riku x Sora foever...
fabre writes chapter 1 . 3/10/2008
I'm trying to find something to say which doesn't come out sounding a lot like "shdasjkd" and more like an actual review, but it's turning out to be more difficult than I had expected.

That was... Really, really sweet. And amusing and funny. In just the right proportions. It was a fun read, and clichés be damned. XD I liked this particular romance novel too.

I loved how Riku pointed out they were caught in a cliché love story, and how Sora's last comment kind of wrapped it up in that sense. It felt very smooth, especially with the way you started the story.

Really enjoyable.
Scootkadoot chapter 1 . 1/22/2008
I love your fics. ;3;
Final Remix chapter 1 . 9/11/2007

Just thought another comment wouldn't go unappreciated.

You're a wicked-talented author! And this was a really sweet oneshot, while still not making them too out of character and fluffy, if I do say so myself. But its not like I really know anything.


~Final Remix
RIKUSORAFTW chapter 1 . 8/14/2007

and adorable and just wow.

the cliches and everything.

ohmygod! loved it!
mehrunnisa chapter 1 . 8/9/2007
AWW! Loved the fluff, this was so cute. XD Nice workk ]
FangedWriter chapter 1 . 8/8/2007
Awesome! Glad I took the time to sit down and read it. Keep up the good work :)
fullmetalguitar chapter 1 . 8/5/2007
Yay! I rushed back to your profile when I came online again and picked the first one-shot I saw! Because once again I have to leave and I knew that if there was another chapter in front of me there would be no way I could turn down more of your writing. And this was adorable and the repeated mentions of it being so classicly romance saved it from being too classicly romance. And the ending was different but still fluff and I loved it to pieces and now I love you to pieces, even more than before! Thank you _
NeuroticSeduction chapter 1 . 8/3/2007
That was funny and hot and fantasterific all at once! Loved, loved!

BeuitifulDisgrace246 chapter 1 . 7/19/2007
oh! that was so sweet!

*giggles like a rabid fangirl*


Almost too sugary sweet. baha. (sorry for the lame joke)

If I die being able to write this good...wel...I won't lolz. You are an AMAZING author: you kept Riku and Sora completely controlled and in character. You portrayed their "getting to know each other" stage so well. Sora stopped talking so quietly after a while and started to confide in him. I completely believed that they were in love, or with all the sexual tension and what not that they were crazy for each other. FINALLY an author who doesn't just base love off of attraction: you hit something more "moral" and "complex" with this piece. I love how well you planned everything out and how you didn't spend too long on any single scene. It was an amazing flow of all the right words that had me hooked and utterly dying for more.


*PLEASE* keep writing...


(You can't deny my love! I'll...I'll...-breaks out into tears* waii! -clings on to amazing author- (maybe some of your awesomeness with rub off onto me. I can only hope.)

teehee! :]

Mucho luck in all future writing aspirations,

LURVE, ~BeuitifulDisgrace246
Kupo3.0 chapter 1 . 7/11/2007

hysterical, adorable, well written, made the cliche bearable and enjoyable

wow, guess I'm a yaoi and straight fan ~laughs~ oh well :P i can't stop reading it XD

great job, well written
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