Reviews for Variations on The First Kiss
Ikonopeiston chapter 5 . 6/3/2007
I knew you could do it! They both moved at the same time. However, are we supposed to really believe that they held off for so long with the Crimson Squad adventure and so forth?

I particularly liked you acknowledging the tactile tendency of the Al Bhed. That was well observed.

These are lovely little vignettes. ;)
Ikonopeiston chapter 3 . 5/31/2007
You are intending to continue, are you not? There are scores of variations on this theme and all of them worth exploring. You are showing the gentleness of their relationship here and it is a great pleasure to explore. Onward!
Ikonopeiston chapter 2 . 5/31/2007
Beautiful! What the perfect answer to the prayer. Ry, these are a joy.
Ikonopeiston chapter 1 . 5/31/2007
You're doing a set of Variations. I am delighted. This one is almost pastel in its innocence and delicacy. Just one question - why would the tent of Nooj be noisier?
19 | « Prev Page 1 2