|Reviews for The Sword of Damocles|
| DylanL chapter 1 . 3/2/2015
very interesting story. i noticed that you used the wrong date for when sinestra first spotted the comet, you put 1998 when im pretty sure you meant 1997. what was the purpose of the bomb though, i cant figure that out, and the last line is initially confusing, at first i thought he had some how survived in a block of ice or something and was re awoken at a future date, but now i think you are talking about lily. another thing that confused me is if he loved hermione then why did he mourn ginny so hard
| Noble Korhedron chapter 1 . 10/13/2013
Oh man, that really sucked how he had to die to do it... *sobs*
| ObsessedWithHPFanFic chapter 1 . 2/16/2011
Well, that's one way to do it. Thanks for sharing!
| dogbertcarroll chapter 1 . 9/19/2008
I'm guessing the ending was him waking up dead. It's a bit unclear.
| SomeGuyFawkes chapter 1 . 8/6/2008
| Daisydill chapter 1 . 3/26/2008
Definitely different than your usual, although I still enjoyed it. Good work!
| hemotem chapter 1 . 1/14/2008
Interesting read. Now where is Harry Potter hm? Dead... Alive? Oh well great read thank you.
| swdrone chapter 1 . 8/27/2007
Very nice. Good punch. Nice closing line.
| Wonderbee31 chapter 1 . 8/20/2007
Wow, this was indeed something nice here, and got to say, looking forward to more of your works in the future.
| Meteoricshipyards chapter 1 . 6/12/2007
Nice. Sumon Comet.
A couple of things I didn't understand. What did Harry use the fertilizer bomb for?
Why did Hermione scream?
Was that the afterlife where Harry saw eyes like his own?
Otherwise, nice. Thanks for the story.
| riter07 chapter 1 . 6/4/2007
That could be a better ending than what J.K. Rowling will do.
but not just because i like the pairing I really did like it!
| K'Treva-Kitty-Mura chapter 1 . 6/1/2007
Oh, wow. For some reason I get the feeling that this is a better plot then whatever JKR comes up with.
| solidflamez chapter 1 . 6/1/2007
So...does everybody die? The ending sorta confused me...But besides that, it was really good!