Reviews for Mythical Fusion
Stronger than you since 1915 chapter 14 . 8/16
So where is it?
Guest chapter 3 . 8/15
If she had the power to control minds, then doesn't she use it for them to ignore her? I think you wanted to make an I-don't-care-if-people-accept-me-or-not-badass-charachter but that sadly didn't project in your writing. Bella seemed more attention seeking and a bit stupid. She could have just not do all the piercings and emo outfits so she wouldn't be called a freak. Also she could have just put thoughts in their head not to confront her when they bully her making them completely forget what they are about to do. The way the story was written only made it seem like Bella is an immature teenager and she may be academically wise but has absolutely no street smarts.
unicornz.334 chapter 14 . 7/23
Is 6 years enough time to update? I don't mean to sound rude but I've read this story tons of times and it's awesome and I really hope it gets continued cx
serayakk chapter 1 . 6/9
This is an amazing story. The Bella you've created is better than the original character with more depth and flaws. Please continue this story, I think it has great potential to be one of the best twilight fanfics.
Mari Wollsch chapter 14 . 12/27/2015
great story, you said you will cotinua, but you didn't, i hope you do xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
storyreader21 chapter 14 . 10/1/2015
Nice story. Looking forward to Edwards reaction when he finds out what happened, that is if she tells him. Hope you update soon.
Willow-wisp-Ghost chapter 14 . 9/19/2015
I love your story and hope you continue and to let you know how much I love this story I have been waiting patiently sighs 2010...
Lucinda Silver chapter 14 . 8/17/2015
You said it will be updated soon, but...it has been five years already. I really love this stories despite some grammar mistakes like "Theirs" instead of "They're". But other than the mistakes, it's an amazing story. I didn't find any story like this, if you did found one, messaged me, please.

Bella is changing into-perhaps, a vampire- creature, instead of an usual overnight. I find this story to be refreshing and hoped it's not abandoned.
jaspersmate81 chapter 14 . 8/1/2015
Very cute story. I truly hope that you decide to continue to update it and possibly write a sequel. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it and I also agree that their choice of casting of Edward was horrible. Personally I think Bella and Jasper belonged together as mates as well as Alice and Edward. They were much more compatible for them if they swapped mates. Keep up the excellent work. I really liked how she receives a new power each year, very creative idea. I would like to see her be around Edward while she receives the next one, so he can see how similar their change is too her gifts being bestowed. I can't wait for your next update.
alextraviolet chapter 14 . 7/10/2015
You mark this story as complete, where is the rest of the story. So not nice when you leave people hanging.
kgarrison3 chapter 14 . 7/3/2015
Like your other story, I am really into this one. Great imagination!
blackcallalily chapter 14 . 6/10/2015
AWESOME!
Shadow 4146 chapter 14 . 5/20/2015
I love this story (idea) since the cullens noticed bella is eating less lately they think she is going to start craving blood and therefore start keeping an eye on her. Does that happen also when is the next update!?
such.a.heart chapter 14 . 5/18/2015
I hope you finish this story. I liked a lot.
artistofthemind chapter 14 . 5/18/2015
This is really good. I hope you post your new update soon.
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