Reviews for When It Rains
loretta537 chapter 1 . 7/27/2008
this is good, however although you're friend was right and ritsuka might suicide if soubi died. soubi would probably also suicide if ritsuka died (after killing ritsuka's mom or whoever killed ritsuka). neither ritsuka nor soubi are emotionally stable, several times it's mentioned that when a sacrifice dies the fighter follows, in fact the only reason soubi lived after seimei died is because of seimei's orders. ritsuka may not actively kill himself, but just let his mom do it, he'd probably fall into a worse depression than before and wouldnt care about anything including eathing and sleeping.
XxXFading-With-TimeXxX chapter 1 . 1/20/2008
what do the 's' and 'a' stand for? thats sad! poor soubi! ritsuka died... *goes off and cries*
Sir Squigglim chapter 1 . 11/25/2007
omg im crying! you have no idea how much it takes to make me cry! that was beautiful. i loved it. poor soubi! i thought soubi had died, but i guess i was wrong. unbelievable
EmoVampireNinjaPimp chapter 1 . 7/18/2007
I was confused...I don't cry easily... I loved it! *glomps* It's SOO SAD! But Ritsuka was me's favowite chawactew! WAAHH! *chu* W
Gary Ben chapter 1 . 6/7/2007
Short and straight to the point. A refreshing read, I must say, since Ritsuka wasn't the one experiencing the angst.

I loved the story. Though I don't really think Soubi'd just leave like that.

Nonetheless, 'twas great. [I mean it, really.]
emptyword chapter 1 . 6/5/2007
There's nothing wrong with short one-shots - they call those drabbles! :) A great idea, wonderfully executed. I did think it was Soubi: "First a 'S' and then an 'A'" was very misleading, you sneaky authoress. The only thing I would point out is that Kio probably wouldn't leave Soubi to grieve alone so easily. Kio's quite empathetic, I believe, and knows that Soubi does need time alone, but his words toward the beginning were a little too polite for roommates with so close a bond.

Lovely one-shot.
Polaroid chapter 1 . 6/5/2007
I don't know why but to me it didn't seem so angsty as it could've been... the main reason for that thought is, I suppose, that I've read so much (and also wrote a bit) angsty stories, so...

But. I didn't say it wasn't good. I liked it much, but as you know, it was so short... Maybe you coul've told the way he died? Anyway, it was good. Write next some long story, not one-shot, I will definitely read it.