Reviews for Danny's Cry
LiteratureGirl12 chapter 2 . 8/17/2016
Guest chapter 2 . 3/16/2016
Oh my god D':
lexi1220 chapter 2 . 2/17/2016
That was really good, will you continue this? Also, just thinking out loud here, if Danny's back broke and not his neck, that theoretically wouldn't kill him. Injure severely, yes, paralyze, quite possibly, but then again Danny has survived a lot that would normally kill someone. Just a thought...
Rose Diva chapter 2 . 12/3/2015
you are killing me aaaah yessss
Guest chapter 2 . 9/29/2013
klarissa.pereda chapter 2 . 7/6/2013
I love the story, it made me feel...I feel like I've been punched in the stomach, my heart feels like a blow to the chest, all wile tears make their way down my face. ...I love it...
Azawrath chapter 2 . 7/16/2012
...WOW. as short as this is, its really deep and messed up...
but im glad to have read it.

anne192 chapter 1 . 5/10/2010
angst is amazing.

screw flamers. your stuff is great! this'll be wicked in a short animated scenario. lovely. 3
U SUCK chapter 2 . 9/13/2009
I think its Crappy
starr1095 chapter 2 . 1/24/2009
full version please but htat was sad
JH24 chapter 2 . 10/11/2008
Wow, I already really liked Danny's version. But Vlad's point of view is even more amazing! The idea, the feeling Vlad has that he has nothing, that Danny brought some light in his life, yet he went so far to destroy the gift he had received, it really made a deep impression on me. I was completely silent when Danny fell down to the earth and Vlad realized what he really had done.

I already suspected it in the previous chapter, but Vlad was really trying to save the young half-ghost. Unfortunately he was too late.

I loved the reference to Vlad's broken jaw, just now written from a different perspective. I really liked it to see that in this chapter again.

I felt a cold shiver passing through me when I read the last sentences. Even though Vlad is responsible for Danny's death, I still felt a bit of sympathy for him. Danny's life is over, and Vlad's nightmare is about to begin. I don't think he'll ever forget this.

I'm speechless. I loved this, and it really made me think deeper about the characters of Danny and Vlad, and their views on each other. Thanks for sharing this wonderful story with all the DP fans.

JH24 chapter 1 . 10/11/2008
I don't know what to say... that... Let me first start by saying that I'm really impressed. When I finished reading my mouth was hanging open, I really didn't know what to say to myself. It was incredibly intense, so emotional.

Poor Danny. I felt so sorry for him. Especially when he said he had failed his duty to protect Amity Park.

The descriptions are amazing. I absolutely love Danny's thoughts about Vlad Plasmius. My favorite part is the moment Danny says he has broken his arch-enemy's jaw. The explanation of Vlad's reaction and the consequences were breathtaking.

This is an amazing story, and yet also so sad. I saw there is a second chapter seen from Vlad's point of view. I'm going to read it next.

Well done, Shining Zephyr. This chapter/story really made me think. Wonderful work!
spiritmind675 chapter 2 . 9/2/2008
how sad!

i had tears when i read how vlad said he was losing everything and the only thing he had...

great story though!

i'm off to read the guardians song now!
Ayva j Damas chapter 2 . 4/12/2008
... you know the perfect song for the beating? Requiem for a Dream... it fits perfectly...

so sad though...
Ayva j Damas chapter 1 . 4/12/2008
wow... yup.. definetly can see the influence...
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