Reviews for Danny's Cry
Guest chapter 2 . 9/29/2013
klarissa.pereda chapter 2 . 7/6/2013
I love the story, it made me feel...I feel like I've been punched in the stomach, my heart feels like a blow to the chest, all wile tears make their way down my face. ...I love it...
Azawrath chapter 2 . 7/16/2012
...WOW. as short as this is, its really deep and messed up...
but im glad to have read it.

anne192 chapter 1 . 5/10/2010
angst is amazing.

screw flamers. your stuff is great! this'll be wicked in a short animated scenario. lovely. 3
U SUCK chapter 2 . 9/13/2009
I think its Crappy
starr1095 chapter 2 . 1/24/2009
full version please but htat was sad
JH24 chapter 2 . 10/11/2008
Wow, I already really liked Danny's version. But Vlad's point of view is even more amazing! The idea, the feeling Vlad has that he has nothing, that Danny brought some light in his life, yet he went so far to destroy the gift he had received, it really made a deep impression on me. I was completely silent when Danny fell down to the earth and Vlad realized what he really had done.

I already suspected it in the previous chapter, but Vlad was really trying to save the young half-ghost. Unfortunately he was too late.

I loved the reference to Vlad's broken jaw, just now written from a different perspective. I really liked it to see that in this chapter again.

I felt a cold shiver passing through me when I read the last sentences. Even though Vlad is responsible for Danny's death, I still felt a bit of sympathy for him. Danny's life is over, and Vlad's nightmare is about to begin. I don't think he'll ever forget this.

I'm speechless. I loved this, and it really made me think deeper about the characters of Danny and Vlad, and their views on each other. Thanks for sharing this wonderful story with all the DP fans.

JH24 chapter 1 . 10/11/2008
I don't know what to say... that... Let me first start by saying that I'm really impressed. When I finished reading my mouth was hanging open, I really didn't know what to say to myself. It was incredibly intense, so emotional.

Poor Danny. I felt so sorry for him. Especially when he said he had failed his duty to protect Amity Park.

The descriptions are amazing. I absolutely love Danny's thoughts about Vlad Plasmius. My favorite part is the moment Danny says he has broken his arch-enemy's jaw. The explanation of Vlad's reaction and the consequences were breathtaking.

This is an amazing story, and yet also so sad. I saw there is a second chapter seen from Vlad's point of view. I'm going to read it next.

Well done, Shining Zephyr. This chapter/story really made me think. Wonderful work!
spiritmind675 chapter 2 . 9/2/2008
how sad!

i had tears when i read how vlad said he was losing everything and the only thing he had...

great story though!

i'm off to read the guardians song now!
Ayva j Damas chapter 2 . 4/12/2008
... you know the perfect song for the beating? Requiem for a Dream... it fits perfectly...

so sad though...
Ayva j Damas chapter 1 . 4/12/2008
wow... yup.. definetly can see the influence...
pearl84 chapter 2 . 1/2/2008
- sobs- And when I thought it couldn't get any sadder! Vlad, you're such an idiot! I hope he is filled with guilt for the rest of his life. Man, I love Vlad, but this... this, I can't believe it. I want to strangle him! Truly heart-wrenching, SZ; Bravo! You sure can write some awesome angst stories! Much Kudos!
pearl84 chapter 1 . 1/2/2008
Jaw drops. OMG! That is so sad! It is so good, but I am emotional shot! Vlad finally snapped! Poor Danny! I loved his thoughts though! I could imagine him thinking this way, about everything. wow... I guess this means Danny will die in The Guardian's song. I actually didn't want to read this one because I knew it would spoil the ending of TGS, but after your reply from my review! I couldn't resist any longer! I am happy I did though and lookie! There's another chapter! Must read!
authoroftherose chapter 2 . 12/18/2007
oh thats good very sad but good. *weeps eyes out*
Rya Starling chapter 2 . 9/26/2007
(blows nose and starts crying) thats so sad

I feel sorry for Vlad now..

(starts crying and forms a river)
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