Reviews for Complications
up all nite chapter 24 . 6/6/2008
Aw, that's adorable!
le dead chapter 25 . 6/6/2008




(Though I do think that Bowser gained 'Grandpa Mush's' approval to quick but I guess it had to be done in order for it to be just twenty-five chapters.)
ebtwisty9 chapter 24 . 6/3/2008

Lovely character work...very believable scene. This one didn't seem too fast at all. C:

oh next chapter should be very, very good. I am very, very excited.
James Birdsong chapter 24 . 6/3/2008
le dead chapter 24 . 6/2/2008
Freaking awesome.

As in the words of Yami-moto from the Abridged series.

"Simply Fabulous!"

Eagerly awaiting the already freaking awesome conclusion!
ebtwisty9 chapter 23 . 5/28/2008
Oh, "most likely"? Have you retreated into the fear of ending Complications? :P

Nice work. I really love your characters...still move too fast for my likings, but you characterize so excellently it covers it up.

Fun chapter...excited to see what's next! :D

James Birdsong chapter 22 . 5/20/2008
Excellent. I'm glad to see it.
ebtwisty9 chapter 22 . 5/19/2008
Nice chapter! Very well written with excellent progression of action. You gets the Razzi SEAL OF APPROVAL. C:

Anywhoo. Loved this..the writing made ya feel like you were right there in the super-kart. Too bad you haven't played MKWii, then you'd be even more up on the Mario Kart...stuff. But I wouldn't let you use Double Dash...then Bowser would have no excuse for not fitting and having to hug Peach. ;)
le dead chapter 22 . 5/18/2008

I applaud you for using the very unused and under developed character Wart.

Finally someone writes something about him!

Can't wait to read the next chapter!
ebtwisty9 chapter 21 . 5/16/2008
DANG you're almost done, arent you? D:

Now I'm quite curious what's to happen...I can see a few things in my find, a few paths you could take, but still. Vehdy Cyudius.

It never fails to amuse me when you stick in refrences like you do. :P

Keep it up, dearie! :D
ebtwisty9 chapter 20 . 5/16/2008

excellent work so far, Mikari. There's a few times when you say unnecessary stuff you prestated, but that's the only error. Intrested with where this is going! :)
James Birdsong chapter 21 . 5/7/2008
Um not super bad or anything like that.
James Birdsong chapter 20 . 5/7/2008
James Birdsong chapter 19 . 5/7/2008
Haha horay.
le dead chapter 21 . 5/6/2008
That was the funniest chapter...EVER!

I was literally just laughing the whole way through!

Oh the scary fan girls...seems Ludwig can never escape them ;)
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