|Reviews for The Virtues of Knocking|
| CactusNoir chapter 1 . 2/27
:D I laughed at it too. That was a clever one though, what would you do if you lost both arms?
| Cocoaflower chapter 1 . 11/22/2013
Yep, I laughed at the last line. XD
| Twilight Okami chapter 1 . 7/20/2013
Quite a quirky one-shot with an unusual conversation between Donnie and Raph! As always, you have great writing and grammar; I imagined their voices throughout and they were perfectly in character!
| Ladyrainbow chapter 1 . 7/16/2013
The end didn't really make much sense. I didn't think it was really that funny. The story was great though. You are a very talented writer. I think it should have been rated t because you had a good deal of swearing. Overall very good story.
| Vela513 chapter 1 . 5/2/2013
I liked Raph and Don's game. And how Raph reacted to Donnie's method of passing the time by cooking up new ways for destruction and fun. And his reason for not knocking. :) Very funny
| TmntRr chapter 1 . 3/22/2013
I loved the ending :)
| The Light of Reason chapter 1 . 2/14/2013
Ahahaha, yes! Oh Donnie, you have a wicked sense of humour XD Great one-shot, I love Raph and Don interactions! There should me more of them!
| Yoline Nimai chapter 1 . 11/9/2012
Really great fic, but then that's not a surprise anymore XD You're just amazing!
| nim draug chapter 1 . 9/12/2012
I laughed, Donnie is a sly turtle!
| Peechy-Keen chapter 1 . 7/18/2011
Okay, that was just brilliant. XD And I read the whole thing through, too! You write Donny's wit fantastically, and the aimless sibling competition hit the mark. Very real, and very funny.
| The Alleycat Ulan chapter 1 . 2/3/2011
Incredible! Haha pure brilliance.
Seriously this is going to be one of those stories I just keep coming back to. My fave lines;
"You're hopeless, Raph. I personally would find a lecture preferable to several inches of poisoned metal in my forehead."
"Yeah, well, we all got our quirks,"
"That way, you don't have to worry about waking anyone up, and I don't have to worry about explaining to Master Splinter why he's got a son with a poisoned hole in his head."
Hehe also enjoyed further in the brother's thoughts about one another and them both thinking "I've got to talk to him about that." I just LOVE the way Don and Raph interact in this, you captured my fave characters perfectly.
And yes, yes I did laugh at the end. Out loud...My brother gave me a weird look, but to your credit when I explained it to him, he laughed too.
Definitely favouriting this D
| Don'tCallMeBones chapter 1 . 8/12/2010
You are definitely not the only one who laughed at the ending. It was deliciously and hilariously ironic. I really enjoyed this some what macabre game Don and Raph were playing. I like the idea of having an auxiliary medic - what if Don is the one injured? It just makes sense to have one of the others able to help when it comes to that.
That being said, there was one tiny error. The active ingredient in Advil is ibuprofen, which is used to reduce pain and swelling. Acetaminophen is Tylenol and is not used to reduce swelling, but rather fever and pain. Other than that? Perfect!
| MizzMegz chapter 1 . 5/18/2010
I always enjoy your take on the guys. And I always find myself coming back to re-read your fics. Especially this one. I love the way you portray Don and the sibling interaction is always spot on. It's a breath of fresh air to read the compositions of an author that actually keeps the guys in character. :D
| Tori-chan chapter 1 . 3/22/2009
Go Donnie! xD
| Fritz Will Get You chapter 1 . 2/17/2009
This was very funny, and also very well written. Good job!
Loved the ending too. :D