|Reviews for Rhythmic Heartbeat|
| Mlanie762 chapter 1 . 4/30
I love it! How they slowly fall in love with each other! Most of the stories I read were all "love at first sight", but it's nice to see things the way it works in reallity! Thanks for sharing this sweet story with us! -
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/17/2015
| Mind's Odyssey chapter 1 . 5/13/2013
Nicely written. Although there's no fluff in this story, I still like it. How the relationship develop in this story is what I like, mild and steady.
But, one thing I don't quite understand is the title of the story. It doesn't seem to fit well with the story though. Other than that, this is one work pleasant to read.
Keep up the good work.
| Rinokirio chapter 1 . 3/25/2012
That was very cute, I enjoy reading the simpler stories like this one, they're much softer and the ending makes you feel all happy.
| OurLordDisco chapter 1 . 1/7/2012
Aww! It's cute! This was a nice story.
| Winged Cherry chapter 1 . 10/29/2011
I love this. The sweetness, the subtlety, and a hint of something more.
The moment Zexion announced his spontaneous kidnapping was close to priceless.
| EdeatheDemonFox chapter 1 . 8/20/2011
The end is so my favorite part! This is so freaking cute! It made me spazz like the total Zemyx freak I am! XP
| kurosora1984 chapter 1 . 1/5/2011
IF YOU WEREN'T ASLEEP RIGHT NOW I WOULD AUDIBLY SQUEAL, NO LIE. 8D 8D 8D
That was SO FUCKING CUTE. And my heart is like...beating faster and shit! (AND OBVIOUSLY I WISH YOU WROTE THE PART WHERE DEMYX CHANGES SLEEPING LOCATIONS, BUT THAT GOES WITHOUT SAYING SO I SAID IT ANYWAY HAHA.) But like, THIS! This whole thing! Your characterization of them is so SUBTLE and PERFECT! I am so freaking jealous. You never TELL a damn THING, this is PERFECT "SHOWING" instead. But the development is so clear and LOVERLY, and FAJKSFLSKDHSLD DAMN YOU.
It's adorable and understated and tugs at my heartstrings and FUCK I love your Zemyx especially THIS. 8D
*frolics off to the shower*
| whiskedaway chapter 1 . 11/25/2010
sweet lol :)
| The Grey Inbetween chapter 1 . 6/6/2010
Oh man, oh man. Words just cannot describe the extent of how much I LOVED reading that story. The relationship between Demyx and Zexion was just beautiful. I love your writing, and it totally sucked me in. Amazing!
| Eternal Grey chapter 1 . 5/12/2010
I love this story! It's really good!
| Keys2theKingdom chapter 1 . 1/18/2010
| 1557757 chapter 1 . 10/15/2009
Demy, Demy, Demy-bear, you're such a wonderful person. -laughs-
Stories like these are why I love Zemyx. :3
| Mortalita chapter 1 . 9/17/2009
Very cute and sweet. I love it when Demyx is played as a very involved musician like this compared to playing it as a hobby. I don't know much about Zexion besides he's quiet mostly and a scholar...I think you did wonderfully.
| BlackRoseMuffin chapter 1 . 5/13/2009
that. was. awesome.
I really like the emotion of it.