|Reviews for A Fine Line|
| callietitan chapter 1 . 5/16/2008
actually, this makes plenty of sense. great job. and i LOVE Avenue Q.
| Angry Paradox chapter 1 . 5/9/2008
| SilentKiller1 chapter 1 . 2/12/2008
it makes sense
| Ana-chan86 chapter 1 . 10/11/2007
Nice one-shot! The "there's a fine line between..." is an interesting concept. Thanks for sharing!
| Black-Rose23 chapter 1 . 9/19/2007
Love the story and love Avenue Q!
| koolmint26 chapter 1 . 8/6/2007
yes blur it!
It makes the world go round!
| courageouscoward chapter 1 . 7/2/2007
i liked that last line...3
| Angelas chapter 1 . 6/30/2007
Was that a kiss at the end? If it was-
THAT WAS THE MOST CUTEST FLUFFIEST THING I'VE EVER READ! xD
And to be honest with you, it's EXTREMELY rare when I read fluff... I dunno, I just don't like it. xD I need the DREAD the ANGUISH the PAIN! xD haha lol
But, seriously, the only things I read revolve around angst and horror. :P With romance of course.
But, ne'ways, I LOVED your story. It's completely well thought out and perfectly written to make it sound adorable. :D You're very poetic. I LOVE that about authors. It gives the story an eery tone... y'know? :)
Fantastic job all the way though. :D
| three words i wish to hear chapter 1 . 6/30/2007
Ahh, this was a nice one shot, Joyce. Hope to read more from you. :)
| kikyobashing101 chapter 1 . 6/10/2007
Hey! This was really cute and a bit funny. Espacially at the end when Naruto tells Sasuke he likes him. And then Sasuke just starts to chuckle and then kisses Naruto. Well Talk to ya later. Ja.
p.s. Tell Bob I said hi back.
| Samira A chapter 1 . 6/7/2007
That was awesoe! it was so emotional. a new sideos sasuke...so sweet and kinda cute. harshlove...made me laugh.
| Forget it Jake chapter 1 . 6/2/2007
Hey, that's 'There's a fine, fine line' by Avenue Q.
I love that song. (It was kinda the reason I read the story.)
Well anyway's the fic was awesome, so cute.
| BlackEyedWicca chapter 1 . 6/2/2007
I rather liked that, good job!
| CyanideAndHappiness chapter 1 . 6/2/2007
I really liked it
It was cute ]