Reviews for Perfection
ghost13579 chapter 1 . 7/28/2010
HEY!

I'M ALTISTIC!

I FIND THAT FUCKING OFFENCE!
Karma Killer 11 chapter 1 . 6/27/2010
Wowowowowowow! This story was... amazing. Heartbreaking, and uplifting too. You are an absolutely AMAZING writer. This story was just... wow. The author note you put up before this story does you no justice - this story was absolutely amazing. D

Ah, and while I'm sending you a message of sorts, may I just say? I've read some of your other stories (Ok, like, two others. But hey. The White Rose was fabulously written as well, by the way. You are one of the few people who can make OCs that I actually like. ;D) and noticed that in your Author Notes you seemed to not have much self-confidence. And now, a few years later, you're getting married, going to college, living life... I'm sorry if it's totally weird that a complete stranger is mentioning this kind of thing, but I'm just really happy for you. :D
PeskyPixiee chapter 1 . 5/22/2010
OH. MY. GOD. this is sooooo good. like unbelievably so. NEVER stop writing, k? :) amazing work.
Guptanation chapter 1 . 3/9/2010
damn good job man... i'm glad it had a happy ending, lol, probably woulda ruined a good portion of my day if it hadn't.
DarkRapture chapter 1 . 2/28/2010
Wow. This fic was even better the second time around. I tried to find it again when I finally had an account, but didn't find it until today. Of all the fics I've read that involve Beastboy in pain(I prefer him in pain over Raven, just sayin) this is the best. If you wrote a story with angst and fighting, it would be awesome!
TOLO chapter 1 . 2/14/2010
So sad...You are a great writer...

...excuse me while I cry rivers...
hokagenija15 chapter 1 . 1/22/2010
This was a good story, sometimes it is the little things that hurt and help people. something I think I have forgotten lately. Thanks for reminding me.
origin of summoners chapter 1 . 1/11/2010
wow that was deep never read so much angst in my life.
Endless Raindrops chapter 1 . 10/5/2009
That was freaking amazing! Great job!
Krystal McKenna chapter 1 . 9/5/2009
Excellent story! I loved how true to life it was. It really shows how easily we can all force ourselves to the edge, in different ways. I liked the references to his age throughout the story.

Personally I think it lost a little bit of the something that made it special in that section where he's waking up. I don't know about others, but that's just my opinion. I guess the introduction of the swearing kind of turned me off the story, but I read on because I NEEDED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENED! (I get obsessed with stories easily.)

Other than that, I really liked this story. It was very touching.
Denalien chapter 1 . 4/26/2009
ehh,not bad but...
wings in the night chapter 1 . 2/7/2009
oh it was so goog I was crying the whole time.

you could feel BB's emotions so well
archersploosh chapter 1 . 11/27/2008
Wow. I think that's a little off character, but I love it. It seems like something the 'hidden' part of beastboy would do. Very well written. *thumbs up*
FrostFaerie chapter 1 . 11/24/2008
So beautiful! sobs Truly a work of job!
melodica chapter 1 . 11/15/2008
It's my 5th time reading this, and I still cry everytime.

Definitely one of the best stories I have ever read. :)
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