|Reviews for Different World|
| HappyPNF chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
I'm guessing that at this point you're not going to update this (it's been six years). But if you are, GREAT, because this is a really great story!
| akan chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
épilogue de different magic? bonne idée.
| Alphamech chapter 2 . 10/2/2007
Wow you finally started a new fic for the last one. This is great so far and I can only hope it is going to get better. Update soon.
| AngelMoroni chapter 2 . 8/12/2007
it was on a passing whim i visited your page, and i can see im going to be doing so more often in the future. but only as often as you update :)
| gemini X chapter 2 . 6/23/2007
Hey great too see a new fic by you. Hope to see more soon.
| aptteach123 chapter 2 . 6/9/2007
WOW! Sounds like a good story so far. I can't wait to see what's going to happen. Keep up the great work, and please try to update again soon!
| stuopidget chapter 2 . 6/5/2007
nothing can be commented so far about the story, it seems going alright though
i hope cho shows up soon, and i'm happy that you're back in the writing circle after a year
| Alayna82 chapter 2 . 6/3/2007
Until now it is more or less a standard beginning. Neither bad nor great, but with potential.
But you need to look into names!
Those were the most obvious.
Correct them and I'm satisfied...
| Devilaire Mshadi chapter 1 . 6/2/2007
Story looks like it has potential. Can't wait for the next chapter!
On a side note, you might need to either get a beta or to double-check what you write. A) Number Twelve, not "number twelve", and the house's name is spelled wrong; and you had "weak" instead of "week". Also, whenever two people are talking, you're supposed to have a different paragraph/line for each person talking or doing an action, i.e.:
"You read?" Harry asked with a grin.
Dudley answered with a matching grin and a nod.
Harry spoke to the empty air, "Dobby. Kreacher." There came a pair of soft 'pops' of displaced air as two...
That type of thing and more kept happening. Just check your spelling and your set-up of paragraphs/sayings/actions, and you'll be great. Your grammar was pretty flawless (nothing that couldn't be changed if you looked back at your spelling, etc.).
That having been said, I can't wait until the next chapter!