Reviews for The Better Man
Raeshi chapter 20 . 4/24
Loving this story, it's so well done. I especially like how you developed Severus's relationship with Dursleys. Can't wait to read more.
amechiro chapter 21 . 4/23
This is such a lovely story; I had lost track of it years ago and I'm so happy I accidentally stumbled into it again 3 So nice to read about a different life for Severus and the possibilities on what could have had happened if the Durleys were, well, nicer. :D Definitely saving it in my faves, so I know my way back. Good luck with everything and thanks for writing!
Sakure of Snow chapter 21 . 4/23
Reading this, it was most welcome and most refreshing. The characters are believable and the story is going along at a good pace. Wonderful work! I look forward to more.
dragoon109 chapter 3 . 4/22
um why send dudly there? for his education going else where would be better
dragoon109 chapter 1 . 4/22
um there was a mistake here. james was the one who started the fight at the lake not snape.
Jaxsprat chapter 21 . 4/21
I have very much enjoyed this take on the potter world! Amazing what one choice can change. And it is all perfectly logical in its sequence. Wonderful talent, thank you for your efforts and sharing your work.
Mari Wollsch chapter 21 . 4/14
great story, hope you will continua soon xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
bridgeportfox chapter 20 . 4/12
Severus' comments must have hit home with Lucius and Narcissa, too, for them to be considering changing schools for Draco. He must feel like he's in an episode of "The Twilight Zone" at this point. (If wizards know what that means.)
bridgeportfox chapter 18 . 4/12
Oh my that won't go over well with anyone but Sirius. Harry's probably none too pleased with Black after Dudley's injury and this will really make him see red.
bridgeportfox chapter 17 . 4/12
Good for Severus. He really has been the better man. At least Remus recognizes it even if Dumbledore doesn't.
Ayjah chapter 21 . 4/7
Love love love this version of Harry's life... Well thought out, well executed... Please tell me there will be more !
madwriter223 chapter 21 . 3/27
Amazing work. A bit OOC, but believeable within the AU. XD
Lady Mage chapter 21 . 3/15
Great chapter! Look forward to your next!
ksecc1 chapter 21 . 3/10
I enjoy seeing how people envision other schooling systems. So all the details were fun. Again, I'm delighted to read an update! Thanks for writing.
moms5thchild chapter 21 . 3/10
I just found this extremely interesting and well written story. You have taken a few years to get this far but the job you have done is great. I see the few years difference in age that Harry went to the Dursleys and the influence of a non-dark Snape changed the whole outlook of Harry's life.
I do hope you manage to finish the story soon, I get impatient when I have to put down a good book, but I will check out your other work while I wait for the next chapter.

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