Reviews for The Better Man
BeyondRubies chapter 22 . 5/17
What an absolutely brilliant concept and execution! I love the way that you have thought this through and the changes that have occurred through a single choice. I really like seeing things through the version of Severus. Thank you for what you have given us and I hope you will consider writing more!
Rachael1510 chapter 22 . 3/22
I really enjoyed this story and I hope you will continue writing.
Guest chapter 2 . 2/19
Nazi loving shit
Guest chapter 1 . 2/19
What ever Black and White Bullshit some retrard Fangirl can cook up, to make Nazi Snape look like an innocent victim...
flower pot girl chapter 22 . 2/11
A brilliant story.
I love the way small changes lead to bigger ones and the net result is Harry having a much better childhood and a whole group of supportive adults working together for his benefit.
Whilst it would obviously be lovely to read more of this, I understand that life takes over and there is a clear direction towards better things and a sense that Harry may not need to deal with Voldemort, but if he does then he will be prepared.
davesaxton chapter 22 . 12/11/2022
One of the better stories that I have read in awhile. Looking forward to see where you take this. Can not wait for what's coming. Keep up the awesome story.
GuestTypewriter chapter 22 . 10/23/2022
This story is remarkable and I’ve loved every minute! I’ve never been a fan of tragedy and this AU has a refreshing change of pace of (basically) if characters made better life choices! I love that each character has retained the basic personality while neither being too perfect nor immobile in each one’s flaws. Dumbledore is a great example—even if he still makes mistakes that make you want Minerva to shake him ;)—and I love this statement:

“No, not everything was under his control, but as it turned out, Severus, Amelia Bones, and many other children he remembered had turned out suddenly to be competent adults. He wasn't quite sure when that had happened, and how.”

That was insightful, showed Dumbledore’s changes, and completely funny! What hundred man WOULDN’T be slightly befuddled to find that the younger generation (and they’re ALL younger, at this point) has grown up and become forces to be reckoned with?!

This is great writing, thank you for sharing!
storm9449 chapter 22 . 9/7/2022
I found this in my favorites and it's such a good read I reread the whole thing!
guest chapter 22 . 8/3/2022
Have reread with pleasure; still hoping that life will let you resume tis someday. Thanks so much for posting what you did.
Guest chapter 2 . 5/26/2022
I agree whole heartedly.
Katja chapter 22 . 4/9/2022
Thanks! I love it!
qwertyuiop123214685 chapter 22 . 3/23/2022
great story, please update!
maxisaraviamgs chapter 22 . 2/3/2022
De los mejores que leí ,una enorme lástima que no haya llegado a un epílogo porque es fantástica
Scott Berg chapter 1 . 1/26/2022
Great story. Really like how Severus gets to have a happy life taking control of his life and showing off his talent as a potions master. I like that it takes the story in a totally different direction and shows how things could have been if the Dursely's actually were given a choice and guidance and raised Harry in a loving family and what Dudley could have been like if he'd learnt properly how to interact with other children and had the chance to be a wizard. It's also good seeing a different Harry being happy and learning away from Hogwarts
ara.wilgin chapter 22 . 11/8/2021
i hope you'll continue writing
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