Reviews for The Better Man |
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![]() ![]() i love the little details like when vernon called Harry "boy" but in this story its a much different tone than canon also I LOVE you ooc dursleys so so so much ;-; |
![]() ![]() oooooohhhhhhh daaaaaaammmmnnnn |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh excellent chapter This story is so therapeutic and well written |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy shit |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dumbledore you fucking bastard My blood is boiling |
![]() ![]() Update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was shocked to see the wonderful quote from Bishop Kallistos Ware. His books were my first steps in conversion to Orthodoxy. I am enjoying the depth and complexity of this story. Very well done. I also love Dudley being so brave. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent story thus far, thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pretty good chapter - well written |
![]() ![]() ![]() Since when did "finite" end the effects of stupefy? Do your research ya squib. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is a brilliant story so far! I hope you find some dribs and drabs of time to write some more! I know the dreaded Real Life is always impeding that for my writer friends |
![]() ![]() ![]() Reading The First Chapter Nearly Brought Tears To My Eyes. I Can't Wait To Read The Rest |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm enjoying this. I understand real life - I've been ill just over a year, myself, so HELL I understand real life - but I hope you will update this. It's well thought out and constructed, and an enjoyable read. I like how you've worked with the Dursleys, and you aren't the only person to wonder whether James and/or alienated himself from them by 'pranking' them [otherwise known as muggle baiting] |
![]() ![]() ![]() AWESOME Lucius is so cool! Great job with that! I really wish there was more to read, but I certainly don't regret reading this! Thanks so much for writing :) if you eventually update, I'll be sure to come back and read it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great, that went well. Could have gone so much worse. Also Sev is an awesome teacher in this story :) |