|Reviews for Blazing Ambition|
| fdsnjhb chapter 1 . 1/14/2012
Mmmmm... All I can say is paragraphs. You know the old saying "you don't know what you got til it's gone"?
It's true when it comes to paragraphs.
A few small issues just with wording and repetition that can be fixed with even just a cursory read through edit. Otherwise pretty damn good, keep writing!
| HarryHermioneEdwardBella chapter 1 . 8/25/2011
| Penny is wise chapter 1 . 1/29/2011
| lana chapter 1 . 1/1/2010
may you become one with appropiate spacing.
| dpeterso chapter 1 . 7/2/2009
very good. Wil you continue this story? Darrel
| Bridgette chapter 1 . 6/14/2007
Some paragraphs would be helpful! I can hardly read it!
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/9/2007
Try Double spacing next time... and have a little bit more than the lemon... Lead up to it in a good way of you have a lemon...
| LillithBlade chapter 1 . 6/7/2007
good story but seems to go to fast from leting each other know they are fancied with each other to fucking and like it says hermione is a brianiac and would ovouisly think of doing something to prevent pregancy and in this she didn't you need to make you characers more like theie normal seleves.
| Bradhadair-71 chapter 1 . 6/6/2007
I definitely adored this story! HARRY AND HERMIONE FOREVER! XD
| dbzgtfan2004 chapter 1 . 6/4/2007
This is a cute story. Please make some more. Harry and Hermione forever.
| Femmeslashxqueen chapter 1 . 6/2/2007
hey that was a great story!
Some spelling errors, but other that that, i liked it.
read and review mine?