Don’t worry about the “cheesiness” of the speech. Goodness (and writers) know inspirational speeches are hard to write. I’m enjoying the fic so far though. Thanks for posting your works!

I liked your story. I found it interesting that your animagus can choose its form. I’ve only read stories where there is potion or meditation to find one’s inner animal.

And that's all the Harry x Ginny we're going to get from your story? One kiss? One and a half chapters? You should take back the bit about it being a Harry and Ginny story, because it's a lie, and shame on you for using that bait to attract readers.

You just confirm what I just said: you repeat that it's a Harry AND Ginny story, and in 44 chapters out of 60, they've only had one short conversation! Your concept of a story of the two of them is very confused, although you don't realize it, because you have Ginny's clone intervening more. Terrible.

You'll take Leila to the other reality, and basically, there will be two Ginnys... Sigh.
Hermione, with how many times her family went on vacation to France, I imagine she'll be at Beauxbatons, and Cho, it'll be weird if she shows up within those many chapters you said and acts as Harry's partner, when she hasn't been seen in the months Harry's been at Hogwarts, not heard from her, not a letter, not a thing.

And you call the fic a HarryxGinny and she barely appears. It seems to me an attempt to take advantage of her name to fool us readers who like fanfics that deal with their relationship, and then find that the only “Ginny” who appears is called “Leila”, and the one who only shares her first and last name is mentioned above, and nothing else.

Yes, Snape was the third in the Aperio. Though it seems wrong to me that they didn't take the opportunity to kill Bellatrix, because they both had reason to hate her, even if Harry didn't know she had killed his mother as well, just with Sirius' death from the other reality; and Snape would want to kill her to avenge Lily. The destruction of his wand is not enough, he can easily get another one.
I understand that you had to kill James and Lily even if it hurts, but there have to be the right circumstances for Harry to want to go back to the other reality. And losing his parents will influence that a lot.

Indeed, copied from what happened to Ginny with Ron. Anyway...
By the way, I'm sure the third person in the Aperio is Snape, I'll see if I'm right soon.

Now you've had Leila not only steal Ginny's personality, but also her experiences and livings at Hogwarts. Again, why do you include Ginny and Ginny2 in the same work? What's going to be left for the original if you ever write about her again? I keep reading the story hoping that you will stop making that terrible mistake, and I keep getting disappointed seeing how not only does the mistake not stop, but it grows. Ugh

That you have never met anyone like Leila? Bullshit, the Ginny of her reality is just like her. Well, actually, Leila is like Ginny. And I see you've gone along with that, without Ginny having said anything in those days, not even a conversation with Harry. Can you just mock her even more? No, I can't. I don't know what her character is used for if it's to drag her through the mud and have her barely appear, giving her prominence to someone else.

Of course you like Leila because she's just like Ginny! Maybe you should give more lines to the original, and not focus so much on the copy, that you end up erasing Ginny completely.

I hope you don't make Leila any more like Ginny than you've already made her this far. Because it would be pretty sick if her sister was exactly the same (not physically but her character), as the girl he's in love with. Plus where would that leave Ginny in your story? If she doesn't have her personality, she won't be the girl Harry fell in love with, she won't be Ginny, just a matching face and body, with her same name, but not her; and not to be her, don't use her. If you are going to snatch her being and give it to Harry's sister, it would be better if Ginny didn't appear in the story, and he wouldn't love anyone, because “falling in love” with his sister, yuck!

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Actually really like your Jeremy character which is weird because I'm not usually a fan of OCs. Would be nice to see him included more in the plot etc especially as he's technically the Ron of this world.

Yeah that was extremely unrealistic. Had little Peter turn into Conor McGregor somehow. Again I like the plot but certain scenes or even entire plot lines are unrealistic with the world you've set up.

Something tells me from that letter there's going to be some serious Snape dick riding but lets hope not.