|Reviews for Best Kept Secret|
| Goomba chapter 6 . 9/16/2008
I think I'm confused. I mean I very much liked the last line in chpt.6 but there need to be more flow. It seemed choppy and I kept asking myself if I was missing something, I kept having to go back and re-read to make sure. Just a little more ... I don't know... explanation, developement, somthing.
Anyhow, thanks for a good quick read, Cheers Jen
| Whirlwind421 chapter 6 . 7/28/2008
| John's PuddleJumper chapter 6 . 5/24/2008
Oh I like, great story! Too great for words
| E. Nagrom chapter 6 . 1/9/2008
oh that last comment from Sam was mean brilliant but mean ( “Did I…did you…did we maybe kiss, before?” he stuttered out...“What do you think?” she whispered to him with a smile.)
| rightxhere chapter 6 . 12/31/2007
I am squeeing SO hard right now at the ending here :D That was beyond awesome! And you really left it open for another story...*hint hint*...that was wonderful though, hon! Seriously wonderful! I love how Sam gave him that teasing smile, it made me grin like crazy!
Sam/Cam FTW! And this story :D
| HAZMOT chapter 6 . 12/22/2007
This is totally enjoyable. I like exploring the relationship between Sam and Cam. I know, sounds like a Dr. Seuss special. heheeh. But, I'm glad you're continuing this. It's special. :D
| nonhalema chapter 6 . 12/22/2007
Not bad...like it
| Entropic Cascade chapter 5 . 12/19/2007
Please continue...where's Sam? Did they kiss? Please, pretty please, pretty please with a cherry on top, continue...
| Whirlwind421 chapter 4 . 9/27/2007
| Whirlwind421 chapter 5 . 9/27/2007
Great story! Write more soon!
| K-laMarie chapter 5 . 8/21/2007
oh oh PLEASE keep going! its getting good!
| E. Nagrom chapter 5 . 8/17/2007
hey just found this fic. can't wait to see if its another trick or not.
| lisaellen chapter 1 . 8/11/2007
I loved the story so far -
| mayanscaper chapter 4 . 7/13/2007
This reads like "Waiting For Godot". I like the style of a stream of consciousness conversation where we are in Cam's head. I'm wondering where you are taking us next.
| chiclete chapter 3 . 7/6/2007
Oh! Poor Cam...