|Reviews for Intolerable|
| SD chapter 1 . 12/11/2008
Aw, that was sweet. Thanks for sharing!
| ashley sparrow chapter 1 . 10/23/2007
that wos brill!
write a sequal!write a sequal!
write a sequal!
| Queen of the Caribbean chapter 1 . 6/12/2007
Nice... I think you wrote Jack into that well; you kept him in character, and I love the fact that he even complimented Will, sorry 'Captain' Will in a round-about way
| Jenn1 chapter 1 . 6/6/2007
I really enjoyed this fic, I think you wrote Will and Jack quite well. Loved it. Hope to see more from you.
| Your Undoing chapter 1 . 6/6/2007
You are definitely way better at caputuring the essence of characters than most authors on this board. Their style of speech, personality, etc... just great. I particularly liked the banter between Will and Jack- it was so realistic, it was like watching POTC4.
| Bookworm12345 chapter 1 . 6/5/2007
The first few lines Jack had and what he was doing around then sounded otherwise,it seemed a bit too serious for CAPTAIN Jack Sparrow.
| Lady Charity chapter 1 . 6/4/2007
Ah, as humorous as ever. I was really expecting something frightening to happen, but this turned out well too :). I especially like Jack (poor guy)...but this story has inspired me to something new
| heartofShou chapter 1 . 6/3/2007
Yay! I like the idea of Will and Jack being friends again. The movie doesn't really give that at the end... Oh, btw, loved this line: "“Blasphemy! Rum counts for everything.”" So very true. lol
| sasuke fanatic1 chapter 1 . 6/3/2007
Ah, a refreshing conversation and meeting of the infamous Captain Jack Sparrow and Captain William Turner II. Great fic. :)
| K.D. Sparrow chapter 1 . 6/3/2007
oh wow, so good, very nicely done!
| Kchan88 chapter 1 . 6/3/2007
This was really good! I've been looking for a fic where Will and Jack talked about what happened, and this was a good one! Great job!
| PirateAngel1286 chapter 1 . 6/3/2007
That was great. I love when Will and Jack interact with each other.