Reviews for Pandora's Box
SanzoGirl chapter 8 . 9/15/2007
Interesting update soon!
JaceDamian23 chapter 8 . 7/31/2007
Fred raised an eyebrow and took a step back. "Whoa, easy cobra. I just came over cause I miss listening to you whine so much. Hope I didn't ruin your perfect little pity party."

*chuckles* omg i love my twins hahs. so funny

Ron snorted and reached for his cup, holding it out in a parody of a toast. "Well, here's to the biggest jackass in the history of the world. May he rest in everlasting damnation." Ron took a long drink of water, his eyes glinting sarcastically. Harry frowned. Despite Draco's temper and inherent nastiness, he had been cleared of all suspicion. However, Ron still hated him. It didn't follow too well, Harry thought, and it made him angry.

Ron sobered when he noticed Harry's disapproval. "Hey, I'm sorry. I know the old boy was a good sport at times. He will be truly missed. I haven't got anyone to piss and moan about anymore. Wow, I feel...bereft." Harry shook his head and stood to leave, more angry and worried than he had before. He said goodbye quickly and hurried from Ron's dark office. ~Why is this bothering me so much? It makes no sense.~ His thoughts rambled aimlessly as he walked back to the Ministry.

wow ron you gota stop thinking like better change your mind and fall in love with him!

"Why is it," he whispered, "that I can do everything right, and still get shoved out of the way like a worthless thing. Harry wouldn't be alive to take that PR job if it weren't for me and what do I get? Nothing!"

aww sad:(

"Maybe you couldn't bear to let me go, Weasley," a cold voice drawled from across the room. Ron yelled and jumped backwards, accidentally slamming the door shut with his shoulder.

*snorts* LMFAO that is such a draco thing to say hehe

Draco smiled coldly. "I was going to wait for you to get here in the morning, actually. I just got lucky. And I need your help, Weasley.

I just got lucky hehe

"Uh huh, yeah, his idea of living forever is serving him your whole miserable existence. I'm not really about that. Draco Malfoy really only fights for Draco Malfoy, along with the occasional innocent kitty or baby duck." Ron gave a snort of laughter. Draco glared at him for a moment, then smiled.

lmfao i cant believe that draco said that...about the baby animals lol

Of course, you'll have to die like I did. There's no getting around that one, sorry. But it's not so bad after you get used to it. Come on, it'll be an adventure that you can call your own, not Harry's."

that sucks cuz then he'll miss his family and friends

You don't trust me? Why ever not?" He paused as Ron laughed shortly. "Anyway, what I plan on doing first is getting some polyjuice potion. During my years living with a Death Eater, I was able to gather quite a collection of bits and pieces of my father's friends."

Ron grimaced. "That's really sick and weird, Malfoy," he interrupted.

lmfao funny

and i cant believe draco and neville are close.

Draco looked stunned for a moment. His eyes grew wide, and his jaw fell. "Whoa, you don't want to like sleep on it or anything? This is a pretty big decision to make, you know. I haven't even told you a fifth of the details you need. And..."

"Hey," Ron interrupted, shaking his head, "don't discourage me, I've had a long day. If I've changed my mind in the morning I'll tell you. Besides, anything beats this job, even spending time with a bastard like you." He smiled and stood. He stared into Draco's eyes for a moment. "Oh, but none of that 'sidekick' bull. Partners 50/50, got it?

lmfao thats funny. loved what ron said.

lmfao omg that fight in the restaurant was hilarious. ron kept on thinking about dracos sexey body and ron landed between a girls legs and is like WOAH LMAFO THAT IS SO funny heehehe

"I sure hope you feel better for that, you ass." He was breathing

heavily, and began to mutter a healing spell for himself.


"I was memorizing the look on your face when I broke your nose. I'm

placing it on my list of moments of supreme joy. Right next to the

time you turned into The Amazing Bouncing Ferret." He sighed


Draco's eyes narrowed, and then he started to laugh. "Fuck you!" he

said, shaking with laughter. Ron suppressed laughter of his own.

lmfao that is fucking funny as hell haha

"Hey, was that an offer, Weasley?" he drawled, his voice dripping

with sarcasm. Ron blushed but continued to ignore him.


"So, do you like being dead?" Ron asked, trying to make conversation.

*snorts* wow what a nice question haah

Draco grinned at him. "If you would put the amount of energy into not

taking offense at what I just said that you are putting into trying to

think of something creative with which to insult me, you would already

be much, much more relaxed. It's all in your perspective. See, you even

expect yourself to be second best." Draco shook his head, clucking his

tongue. Ron just stared, at a complete loss for words.

lol i love draco

~WHY do I think he's attractive?~

cuz he's fucking hot as hel

Creevey!" Draco yelled. The boy stopped instantly, and looked

positively terrified.

"Yes?" he squeaked, his voice barely above a whisper.

"Slow down, take a breath!" Colin took this advice and inhaled deeply.

lmfao omg that is like the third time draco interupted colin hehe

The second thing he

noticed was that the blonde smelled good. ~Gah. Not gonna think about


i bet he does

He turned his back and began chopping something up on the cutting

board. "Are you a virgin, Weasley?" he asked suddenly. Ron, taken aback

by the question, was speechless. When no reply came, Draco turned and

looked at him expectantly. "Well?" he asked.

Ron blinked at him. "What the hell business is that of yours?" he

asked, finding his voice.

*snorts* cant believe he asked that haha

and OMG I LOVE seamus and ron hehe cute

lmfao omg they gota dress like girls? LOL too funy

Neville was too shocked to even react. He was surrounded by Justin's screams and images of his parents. And then he imagined Justin's eyes as empty as his mother's when she looked at him. He closed his eyes feeling tears begin to well up.

aww that is sad. lucius is being a prick

Nothing. It just looks for all the world like you are giving Colin here the up and down. If you take my meaning." Ron felt his cheeks flush. He couldn't think up a good comeback, however, so he remained silent.

haha he gotcha hehe

"Who decorated this place, anyway? I feel like I'm in a really cheap hotel."


The door finally opened and Ron found himself face to face with a very sleepy, rumpled looking Hermione. He grinned and held his arms open for a hug, but she just stood in the doorway, staring at him blankly.

"What. The. Hell?" she said finally. Ron sighed and dropped his arms, all hope of a warm welcome lost.


"Well! You show up on my doorstep at six o'clock in the morning, dressed like some sort of Muggle teenager with a half-crazed look in your eye and looking like you could do with a long, hot shower, and you expect me to think that everything's just fine?

lmfao you tel him

"You want to borrow..." Hermione's eyebrows nearly disappeared into her hair. "I'll be damned, Ron, whatever this is, I hope you get to the bottom of it soon. It's really gone to your brain." She stood up and shuffled out of the room, calling "I'll be right back!" over her shoulder.


"How sweet, you decided to wait up for me," he quipped with a grin.

Draco raised a bleary eyebrow. "You know, Weasley, I've had this little suspicion that there's someone else..." he trailed off and grinned. Ron just rolled his eyes and sat down next to Draco, his arms crossed over his knees. He stared blankly at the carpet for a few moments until Draco's voice broke into his thoughtless daze.

"Hey, Weasley?" Ron looked over at him his eyebrow quirked slightly in a silent invitation to continue. Draco made a very serious face and rested one hand comfortably on Ron's shoulder. "You look like shit." Ron stared at him for a moment and then burst into half-hysterical laughter

lmfao aww i love how they talk together

Colin grinned and threw his arms around Draco in a tight hug. "Thanks! Good luck with everything, and owl me posts, will you? I need to be kept up to speed if I'm to be of any use to you, you know! And make sure you take care of Neville, will you?"

Draco just blinked and patted Colin's back gingerly. "Right," he said." Now let go." He brushed off the front of his shirt as Colin backed away. "D'you want us to take you to a floo entrance?"


omfg gr they finaly kiss and there are no mort parts *Cries*

i love this story. its great. have you ever wrote more?if not i wish you would

asmntu chapter 1 . 5/16/2005
samurai shoes chapter 8 . 8/10/2004
rather nice I think. You will keep writing won't you.
chimerical chapter 8 . 6/30/2003
Well, Zyre, it's been a long time since you've updated this wonderful story, and I just wanted to give you a review that might, possibly, encourage you to continue. ::hopeful look:: You're one of my favorite Draco/Ron writers, and, truth be told, there isn't enough good Draco/Ron fanfiction out there. So, update when you can, and a new chapter would make my day. ;-D

mindureown-j chapter 8 . 4/6/2003
aw... u captured that last bit really well there. good on you! i love the whole plot esp neville and his supplies of illegal plants. a stroke of genius on ure part me thinx.

this whole story screams Draco/Ron with all the subtle hints. i absolutely loved the way draco dived in for the kiss.

don't know why but creevy always reminds me of tiny tim. oh well, hope this review along with all the others inspires u to update soon!

can't wait to read more of this!
Mithua chapter 8 . 3/31/2003
This is awesome! You've thought things out perfectly and the plot's really interesting! And it's Ron/Draco
Ixtlil chapter 8 . 12/1/2002
This is really neat! I love the way you put little unnecessary details in when you describe the settings: the picture on the wall in Barty's, the homeless person and the coffie shop owner, piles of clothes in Draco's bedroom and the description of the posters on the walls, the piece of trash Draco kicks, and of course the description of the stuff in the Weasely's house, just for examples. It all helps to visualize the setting and get the mood across. The visuials are grate, but don't forget to pay attention to the other sences; tell us how pungent the garbage in the alley smells, how smooth the bathroom tiles feel under Ron's feet, describe the bitter taste of warmed over coffie, the sound of paper russeling as they turn pages in the books.

Also, it really makes me think of the X-Files, especially the scean at the end of part one where Ron comes back to his ofice at night, finds the piece of paper on the flore, and Draco sitting at his desk. Very remnicent of a scean from the episode "The Red and the Black". I almost expected Draco to call him "tovarish" and give him a kiss! (this is a good thing btw.) This is looking grate so far (especially the end of Ch. 8!) I can't wate to read more!
MysticBlack5 chapter 8 . 10/20/2002
entrapment of the mind! thats what i think of this story! also, graphicly sickening, and yet ... its great! P keep writing!
Indus chapter 8 . 10/15/2002
Love this story, please continue it soon.
linkinparkchica chapter 8 . 10/9/2002
cool fic i like it.
skypixie1234 chapter 8 . 10/3/2002
Yes! A kiss! Oh the kiss! Hooray for the kiss! You know how long I've been waiting for this, you wonderful woman you! And you know what, I miss you! How long has it been since we talked? *sniffles*

I am so happy this was uploaded, the amount of times I hounded you about this story! lol! So glad to see it again, so glad! It's one of the few post-Hogwarts fics (if only) I actually like, like so well in fact that you know it's in my faves!

This story was one of the first stories I ever read, if not the first R/D... you made the insane shipper I am now! Tis all your fault!

Oh, loved this chapter, and I love you lively and energetic Colin! Bless him!

Can't wait for more... what happens next?

Deezley chapter 8 . 9/18/2002
No way! Did my preassure force you to keep writting? Weee! I'm so happy you continued this. Really, I'd been waiting for too long. *glare* Anyhow, this is a great chapter! And we got a little action at the end. Ah, sweet. I hope they get Neville back (although not too soon. There's gotta be some sweet action before Neville comes back and spoils it!) *ahem* Woo! I can't wait for the next chapter! You do be one talented girl.


siw-wa chapter 8 . 9/18/2002
Sweet! Very Sweet! O I have been waiting for this chapter for ever and it turns out to be very good. I am happy, though when is the next chapter? Soon I hope?
scythefire chapter 7 . 4/21/2002
I love how this is progressing! More :)
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