Reviews for How Young and Innocent |
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![]() ![]() I love all of these. Please write more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh yes, let Charlotte sleep a little longer. ;D I loved this then and I love it now! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() A nice glimpse into what the future might hold. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oohlala, love me some R/C fluffiness! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's always interesting to see Raoul's POV in stories, and I think we don't get to see it often enough. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Totally my head canon now. ;) I hate the "reimagined" tour and how it deals with this scene SO MUCH (as you already know). I like how Christine is given an actual choice here and she makes it, even though she knows that she's putting herself in danger by doing so. And Raoul being his sweet protective self. ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! Far too few R/C stories and this was just cute and genuinely wonderful. Keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice to see Raoul here! You do such a great job of capturing a scene in a few words. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw! I can't get enough of these! XD It was sweet and beautiful as always, and the way Raoul saved Christine made me smile. The only thing I might consider revising is this: "Suddenly, though, there was a roar that drowned out the crowd’s applause . . ." I didn't like the beginning of this sentence. I think if you dropped out the "though" it might sound better. Hopefully you don't take this as me being mean, just trying to make a suggestion! Besides that, wonderful job! Keep writing these, I LOVE them! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sweet. :) Brought a smile to my face. I love these little R/C things, and the scarf thing has always been a favorite scene in the musical. (Unfortunately they cut the dialogue from the movie! Why?) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't believe that I haven't reviewed this one already! I really like this one, RAA possessive Raoul. ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice! Great chapter! Don't take comfort for too long, Raoul . . . |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yet another sweet drabble. I just love how both Raoul and Christine constantly refer to the ring - it's so adorable! Keep the awesome drabbles comin'! :) - SJ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, how cute. I like the ring finger/neck thing. So cute. Yay they're engaged! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dude, I JUST checked up on this story thinking that maybe you had only updated ONCE... and what do I find? SEVERAL updates? That's awesome! :) In short, I loved these last few drabbles... especially the one with Raoul's "foolish grin." *lol* I could just picture Raoul - any stage Raoul - doing that. :D Keep up the amazing work! :) - SJ |