Reviews for Melody of Love
DMS chapter 11 . 11/8/2007
Hello you did well with the story and I'll give 4/5 for prologue but it was still really good and 98/100 to explain why more and ahere's your recipe: 'be more specific about your story and make it sound more exciting and remember to sound like your hving fun!'
Sorella della Luna chapter 11 . 10/30/2007
good...i love how you ended it...i enjoyed this one...:D
Elle.V chapter 1 . 8/2/2007
hey... u kno how almost 90% of Gakuen Alice Fanfics is about Mikan & natsume being older and looking more attractive? guess what... there's someone who made some VERY NICE of GA picz of them being older... check it out! e words are in Japanese but you cn easily search for it. under Alice section... check it out ok?

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minahoru chapter 11 . 7/22/2007
make more onegai i very very like it!
sc93 chapter 11 . 7/9/2007
i love the way you write stories - the language is just so beautiful. sweet,simple and clear - like your style. keep writing. :)
sc93 chapter 1 . 7/8/2007
hey! nice story just checked it out. about the previous review, thanks for the reply! and continue ur stories, waiting for u to update. nice storylines, ur fanfics r pretty good.:)
terei chapter 11 . 7/4/2007
the story's great! i like it so much!

well, good luck on your stories! hehe
Arushi chapter 11 . 6/29/2007
Hi,

your story was quite nice but i dont think Mikan can keep so many emotions bottled up. She is the sort who say exactly what is on thier mind.

still the story was nice and quite sweet.
angel514 chapter 7 . 6/28/2007
lovely ... (",)
ladalada chapter 11 . 6/27/2007
wait was this the last chapter

if not update soon if it was

write another story soon
kemcat16 chapter 11 . 6/27/2007
kawii alittle corny at the end but still very kawii
Niane Anne Marie chapter 11 . 6/27/2007
I really really REALLY LOVE this fic so much!

I was so kiligz... or in other words, as I have already said,

"i luved it!"

your such a great writer! I'm lookin' forward in reading your other fics!
Niane Anne Marie chapter 4 . 6/27/2007
that was a very nice chapter! like it so much!
Niane Anne Marie chapter 2 . 6/27/2007
Chapter 2 is NICE! SO ROMANTIC! like it so much! hehe...
Niane Anne Marie chapter 1 . 6/27/2007
I'm very confused in this chapter!

Did Natsume and Mikan plant the tree?

or was it Natsume and Ruka?

or was it Ruka and Mikan?

WaH! I'm so confused!

still, the story is nice... just don't make it confusing okay?

by the way, i'm still... err... 12 but i'll be 13 next year!
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