Reviews for The God of the Sun |
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![]() ![]() Are you going to do a sequel to this story? |
![]() ![]() ![]() You spelled Egyptian wrong in the summary, just a heads up |
![]() ![]() After reading some good fanfiction this just a big glass of yikes. The jokes are genuinely awful and the writing is piss poor. But there are hints of something better. Just hints |
![]() ![]() What the hell is “yer” supposed to be? Try using real words! Also, run this thing through a word processor and spellcheck before posting – it’s riddled with grammatical errors! |
![]() ![]() ![]() tried to read but it is like written by a first grader. see the dog, see the dog run and now see the dog s(h)it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story I it good job writing the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great Story |
![]() ![]() Brilliant, I loved this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon |
![]() ![]() quit in the middle did ya? |
![]() ![]() ![]() sweet chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I 3 this story... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey SlytheringRules I loved your story! Are you planning on continuing? I would definitely read it if you did. You're an awesome writer and I hope you write more Luv ValkyrieRaylene |
![]() ![]() I liked the story, very much so. But I was disappointed it finished so soon : Voldemort isn't really dead, where did Beatrix go ? She was battling Dumbeldore and then He and Harry went. How are the others ? What will Harry learn ? Will he learn and then find the Hocruxes, or is it somethimg else in this story ? Will Seth just give up ? In MY view, the story isn't finished, there is too many unanswered questions. |