I really enjoyed reading this. Honestly, it was great!

Oh no... Daniel, go after her!

Ooh, Betty's staying over... Lol.

It'd be hilarious if Claire just popped out of nowhere. Pop! Goes the Claire!

Ok, I'm going to stop now. Great job!

Ooh, mystery and suspense!

Ok, it could be Hilda or Ignacio... But I doubt it...

Ooh, Daniel likes Betty... Interesting.

Lol, great job!

I'm really liking this story!

This was a good chap! Great job!

Ooh, me likey!

Seriously! It's very well-written and in-character!

;)

Cool! I'd like to see where this goes!

Awesome. Can u lease make them make love for once. Awesome

Ahhhh this was soo beautiful .

You have such an amazing way to create a certain sense of passionate ambience. The world around me literally faded out reading every line, every word, of your story.
You, my friend, have a talent which I desperately envy of.

"I mean it. You're worth at least a million of all the Blaines and Amandas of this world."
AWWWWWW *METLING IN A PILE OF GOOEY DETTY GOODNESS*

"I was going to take the couch, but if you really don't trust me I'll sleep on the bathroom floor…"
LMAO!

Really enjoyed reading this, particularly liked the analogies used (e.g lions and the gazelle, and the rain beating so heavily) to prepare the reader (i.e. set the tone) with regards to wat is about to happen.

Kudos and brava

BEAUTIFUL Story, LOOOOOVED it. Please write another one. Whenever you can.