|Reviews for A Moment|
| Dani chapter 1 . 8/27/2009
OMG this is so amazing - why isn't there a TON more? This is just incrediblely written - I hope you get this and continue!
| miss wizard of oz chapter 1 . 9/2/2007
Of course you should continue it. It's great!
I wanna know what's gonna happen to Danny
| Anita-U2 chapter 1 . 6/6/2007
Of course you should continue! That first chapter was already amazing! Cant wait for next!
| Dani chapter 1 . 6/5/2007
OMG I LOVE this story - its amazing - more please! A lot more!
I can't wait so the sooner the better! :)
| Skylar87 chapter 1 . 6/4/2007
PLEASE DON'T KILL DANNY! I really wanna see how this turns out, but I really don't want Danny to die :( Someone that gorgeous should not be killed. This is really good so far (but would be better if Danny didn't die) and I can't wait to read the next chapter! :) Update soon please!
| Yemam2422 chapter 1 . 6/4/2007
I am in total shock at that ending! I do think you should continue so that we can see that although Danny is falling lifelessly to the floor he is not actually dead! (Knocked out, perhaps?)
I'm joking - whatever you have planned will be great, I'm sure.
I like the short sentences and fragmented writing style you used. Although it was a short chapter you conveyed Lindsay's disbelief and despair at this moment very well (I'm assuming it's L since you didn't actually use a name).
Also liked how you have Lindsay acting as a narrator, addressing the audience directly at times.
And again, you definitely did a great job of building suspense to that shocking ending. As a D/L shipper I love happy endings, but I do like your story and am curious to see the events leading up to this moment.