This is my favorite chapter so far:'))

This is so amazing :') I get chills reading this story! It's so fantastic!

This was beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. I was cursing your name when the Doctor took away Rose's memories of their time together, but I understand why you did it and I'm glad he finally manned up and came clean with her. It had me near tears at the end. I think you managed to find their voices and write them with an amazing insight. Now I have to find an AU and pretend that they are together, the way they should be. Well done!

Awww, poor Doctor.

as long as im giving music choices look up This Night by black lab as well.

I cant explain what this chapter did to me even if i tried, which apparently im going to do anyway. It felt like something wispy and cloying reached down my throat grabbed ahold of my heart and yanked it up to choke me. My blood sounded like thunder in my ears and the world in which i live in disappeared. It was magical and everything i believed or fantasized a union between the two of them would be, and brought to lite the angst and pain that is carefully hidden in the show. Im not sure if u still read the reviews people post on here anymore or not but i believe u deserved to know how much u made my day, seriously my head has been in the clouds ever since reading it yesterday. Also lookup Iron by woodkid the words and tone of the song fit eerily well if u ask me. Keep writing you have the ability to give life to words that would be a tragedy to ignore.

I've enjoyed every chapter of this thus far, but this chapter is by far my favorite. You've painted such a beautiful scene of the Doctor falling apart in such a Doctorish way that isn't OOC at all. Gorgeous. (:

this chapter was so adorable, I just had to review :) I want to go to an amazing amusement park on some comet a billion miles away...fml ;)

Awww I love it already

Ah..eh..Phew? Helle-flippin-luja, that was, eh..(my hands kinda shake typing this. Does that say enough?)

I think that was the epitome of the idea why you should smile at the Doctor, tell him you love him dearly, and then slap a Great Big Red Sign on his chest saying: DANGEROUS - don not go near! Do not touch - and run! I don't usually stray into any categories beyond T (coward me, always), but it has to be said: this was awesome (and frightening). It explains a lot, and much more then just 'the Doctor is such a gentleman and he just doesn't DO things like that' Bull. And now we now why. So really, really, really good!

This nearly made me cry, the memory-wipe part. Brilliant job.

Thank you for writing this, it was magnificent.

Just stopping mid-reading this incredible series to say oh - my - god. This is an amazing chapter. So dark, intense, lustful, emotional and beautiful.

This was an absolutely incredible series. Thank you so much! Just got the series 2 box set and I've been reading your stories while watching in order. It's a perfect companion piece, well-written and true to the character. Brilliant work!

that last bit made me cry...too good.