Reviews for Initiation
MoffandAvencore chapter 1 . 6/29/2013
Oh my gosh, you just made my day. This was the perfect mix of humor and slight brotherly angst. Well done! XDXD
philisnotonfire chapter 1 . 7/20/2010
lol that was really entertaining

i love drunk al

great job :D
Reader chapter 1 . 12/19/2009
Amusing. I've never been drunk myself... Drank the "neck" of a beer once and started feeling "fuzzy". It freaked me out so I gave my drink away. -_-
the-ice-cold-alchemist chapter 1 . 10/15/2009
haha! al got pissed on 2 glasses of wine! lol
Golden Protectorate chapter 1 . 8/27/2009
hahaha, reminds me of me when I first started drinking, except I've never gotten sick... I love the part where Al says “Meowo” is a dog.

No Hawkeye at the party! :( She's my fav, but since Havoc made an appearance, it's all good. No more drunken birthdays for Al, it seems.
Manifestation of a Storyteller chapter 1 . 8/6/2009
He He drunk Al is funny you have written alot of fanfiction i am making my way down the list
Kiku-chan3322 chapter 1 . 6/23/2009
Al is the cheapest drunk in the world! xD And I have to say that title fits him. He doesn't look like a person who can handle alcohol. I'm surprised he even made it to two. lol.

anyways great story. Loved it. It's hilarious!
vampyfreak chapter 1 . 4/23/2009
Great fic, and don't worry i'm a lightweight too, it's awesome i spend so much less on alcohol!
anon chapter 1 . 1/8/2008
*laughing*

Oh my gosh. There were a few grammatical errors, but it was hilarious!

Al: Do you think at my next birthday, we could have-

Everyone else: NO!

HAHA!

I loved it
De-Irish-Waffle chapter 1 . 1/5/2008
XDD

I never knew you could get drunk off two glasses of wine. HAHAHA!

Poor Al.

Heh...cowcat...
Creative Spark chapter 1 . 11/5/2007
lol... poor Roy... he dosn't know what happened... that's cute. Al drunk... cowcat... Ed under the couch... that's cute too.

It was filled with cuteness.

-Spark
ArmoredSoul chapter 1 . 8/14/2007
XD

Just two glasses, eh?

This is taking me for ever to write, 'cause I can't stop LAUGHING!

ROFL!

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHA!

Al: Meowo...

Me: XD

AL: I don't feel so good...
AdventureAddict chapter 1 . 7/10/2007
Yeah, this is one of the fics i read. I found it very funny, and stuff like that. but it was a little strange that Al swore in the story but Ed actually didn't. Unless of course all those 'darns' were actually meant to be something else... XD

But yeah. Ed got very bad language, don't he?

I read one other fic where Al got drunk though. very different in comparison. Al ended up dancing on top of a table... without a shirt. crazy fangirls. you portray drunkenness much better, i'd say. ;D
Songfic Misstress chapter 1 . 7/9/2007
OMG, SO FUNNY!
Iron-Maiden Alchemist chapter 1 . 6/18/2007
LOLz, i dunno, that was just very amuzing XD! really i'm surprised Al even touched the stuff, but it was something new for him to try out anyways

lmao good story!

out.X
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