Reviews for The Magical Chronicles: Power of Shinobi
Guest chapter 1 . 4/21
He's been trying to kill Harry using different people's bodies for the past three years,

Guys, I think we just found Orochimaru's long lost twin.
Guest chapter 3 . 3/5
Damn... I know that you're not really allowed anything other than a toad, cat, or owl... But couldn't Naruto have gotten a fox? I know he's got the summoning scroll for the toads... Ah whatever! Makes sense so I can't argue!... Damn it...
Guest chapter 1 . 3/5
Hm, I would have liked it if they weren't undercover and just acted like badassed... But what can you do... It's already written...
MatthewBadger chapter 1 . 12/5/2015
doesn't sasuke have the rinnegan? he'll need to disguise that shit.

how does a translation jutsu even work? this is't goddamn majic, you can't place a jutsu onto an inanimate object willy-nilly. that's why sealing exists in the first place!

why the heck is tsunade defiling the 1st hokage's necklace? isn't that disrespectfull of her? i know he's her grandpa but still!

also, this assignment feels awfully mundane to be sending naruto, sasuke and sakura on. that's taking 3 S-class threats out of the village for about a year. that seem's pretty wasteful. a single ANBU could get this mission done.
Ndasuunye chapter 6 . 2/2/2015
Well technically for Sasuke, he did in fact die. When he had the curse mark and put in that basket, he is technically suppose to be dead for him to reach curse seal level 2 so yeah, he did die already. Not sure about Sakura though but still that was funny as hell. Good show with Trewlanly.
Guest chapter 2 . 10/14/2014
Story sucks. give up writing
silverbyakugan chapter 1 . 5/31/2014
good story
Plixosm chapter 1 . 5/24/2014
I...have an urge to strangle you. (Yes, I'm a violent person).
WHY FOR THE LOVE OF GOD DID YOU HAVE TO RE-WRITE THE WHOLE DAMN FIC?!
It could've gone worse. The screaming. I'm refraining myself from writing too much profanities in public. You're lucky.
But I just have to say..
THIS FIC IS AWESOME!
even though it would have been better if it was finished...
Loner Kid chapter 9 . 1/19/2014
im really sorry about this. but i cant continue anymore. i absolutely desbite the sasusaku pairing and how u focuses on sakura all the time. i mean, i dont hate her, but its just annoying that u focuses on sakura and her relationship all the time. theres not even some golden trio moments. anyway, ur story idea is great, but it just doesnt fit my liking. m sorry but this is the farthest i can go. good luck.
Person chapter 14 . 8/16/2013
Yeah Sasuke! Go get some!
Person chapter 2 . 8/11/2013
Neeeeeejjjjjjjiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii...Yesssssssss...
BoomPowMina chapter 21 . 7/25/2013
?are you shitting me? YOU DIDNT FUCKING FINISH THIS ONE DUDE! THE HELL MAN?! UGH I AM PISSED, IM GONNA READ THE OTHER ONE, AND THEN SCREAM, WICH I ALREADY DID WHEN I SAW THIS! GOD DAMMIT MAN!
BoomPowMina chapter 19 . 7/25/2013
I got all excited, and then BOOM, athors note...dammit
BoomPowMina chapter 18 . 7/25/2013
Well...i cried twice...WTF KAKASHI CANT DIE MAN! NOOOOOOOOO! HE DIDNT DIE RIGHT?
They will be together forever...DAMMIT KISHIMOTO BRING SASUKE BACK!
BoomPowMina chapter 17 . 7/25/2013
That was so fucking bad ass when they were likeclue 1 2 and 3!
So awesome...xD so now they know...good for them lol
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