|Reviews for Witch|
| nash.sara610 chapter 8 . 7/5
Please please please continue this awesome story.
| Guest chapter 8 . 7/5
| nikapanda chapter 8 . 12/31/2015
Please update please please update please
| Brizzy chapter 7 . 7/21/2013
are you going to continue with this story? you are a very talented writer and I hope you do
| Sailor2Moon chapter 8 . 11/30/2012
Please update this story!
| Guest chapter 8 . 8/30/2012
LOVE this story.
| Loving Last chapter 5 . 8/22/2012
so the killer for clara (ch 5), serena sends a blast of energy to him that breaks both his arms...but he manages to strangle her and catch her foot? you might want to revise that part a little
| Dertupio chapter 8 . 8/21/2012
Haaaaa, Thanks for the update. I though you forgot about the history.
I hope the next chapter is soon
| LoveInTheBattleField chapter 8 . 8/20/2012
Keep it coming.
| TropicalRemix chapter 8 . 8/20/2012
what happened to serena? Did she use too much magic?
| Black Daimond chapter 8 . 8/20/2012
I know my stories suffer from inconsistent persona; sometimes I write in 2nd person, sometimes in 1st, I'm editing all of my work to fix this and other problems (Grammar and spelling) So bear with me. I will update when I edit all of the chapters.
| Brizzy chapter 8 . 4/10/2011
:-) ~ :-) ~ :-) ~ :-) ~ :-)
| LadyArcana81 chapter 1 . 2/18/2011
you're right it does seem alittle disjointed. but that could easily become your signiture writing style.
The sailor suit comment came out of left field. You might want to work on establishing the enviroment more. don't be afraid of fillers or rather adding background information, even if you think it is superflous. I've found it is better to give too much detail than to have too little.
you're good at establishing who is talking though, personally I like giving people names that way if you have multiples of the same type of people talking, no one gets confused.
also is this a medival world, modern world, futuristic world, or a blending of diffrent timelines (think star gate series) if you add a description of small details like the shape of a window, the material used for furniture, mundane things; it goes a long way in subtling painting a picture with words.
| Death and Rebirth chapter 8 . 9/25/2010
| moonxxprincessxx18 chapter 8 . 9/12/2010
You know, you writing a really great story. I'm really enjoying it right now! Please update soon! I wonder what is going to happen to darien and serenas relationship once her and her people go back to the moon. I have a feeling beryl is going to get in the way soon! Till next chapter...