Reviews for Twycross
RougeBaron chapter 6 . 6/25/2007
Great and sweet finish. If I can write romance half as good as this, I consider myself lucky. And rated R? There's nothing in this chapter worth R, IMHO.

One little comment: the military frown upon romance between lance mates, doubly so superior-subordinate romance. Maybe there's an exception for them since they're mercenaries, but I don't know. I'd love to see where this romance go on the next installment.
RougeBaron chapter 3 . 6/14/2007
Jason Youngblood!

Great move adding the legendary Crescent Hawks! This is the unit that sucked me into the world of BattleTech, and nobody seems to remember who they were. Great to read them here!

However, as far as I can remember, Crescent Hawks were Lyrans. I'm not aware if they ever moved to Kell Hounds. Do you have a source for this?
RougeBaron chapter 1 . 6/6/2007
LAMs, huh?

It's been a while since we saw it. I don't even remember if LAMs ever made it to any novel. They're covered in the old rule books, then disappeared, and only showed up in fanfictions (damn legal infringement). But fanfics are good enough.

Alright sentinel28, take those LAMs out!
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