|Reviews for Following the Clues|
| ScOut4It chapter 13 . 5/19/2013
Some times timing is your enemy, and sometimes your friend. Here I suppose that Sara feels like it's the enemy (when she is too slow to recall her acceptance of moving in with a single mother), but I'm absolutely positive that the end result will be in her favor.
Another last chapter cute moment with Catherine playing so well with Sara as she speculates on her possible interest in the 'fairer' sex.
| ScOut4It chapter 12 . 5/19/2013
Comment for last chapter (but internet wi-fi failed):
/You did good with showing the "personal space issues" of Sara while showing the sexiness of Catherine. Way to bring in the long road ahead, but how they're gravitating closer to each other, issues be damned. (I am glad I read that character bio now, or I'd be very confused. Poor girl.)/
And regarding this one:
So it begins :) The 'temporary' fix of staying in the guest room. Have I said "Nice!" enough today?
| ScOut4It chapter 6 . 5/19/2013
/Swallowing against the tightness in her throat, she reached out a shaking hand and pushed into the cooler. The bright lights bounced off the steel tables and equipment, but to Catherine, the room was done in shades of black and grey. Numbly scanning the name cards on the various drawers,/
| ScOut4It chapter 5 . 5/19/2013
Investigating and investigator has to be tough.
Interesting development, you really piece the puzzle pieces together like a cop drama. Nice!
| ScOut4It chapter 2 . 5/19/2013
I'm so not familiar with CSI :)
I did read a bit of character bio.
Okay, definitely won't dig in too deep right now. I'm avoiding homework again!
But, seems like a nicely engaging read :)
| CurlyAkemy chapter 25 . 4/28/2013
It's a sleepless night for me right now. Mmmmm almost two in the morning. And I laughed out loud at the end of this, waking up my wife sleeping next to me. Hahahaaaa
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/19/2013
Wow i jst finished reading all of your story and it was beautiful...! You depicted the emptions and development of their love so well. Thx for writing this:)
| island.dred.insomniac chapter 63 . 2/25/2013
This was great! You have included the day to day growth of each character. The one sex scene was well done and it was not over the top. The relationship made sense. The issues made sense. Hell, you even snuck in a proposal and it was not even the end of the story. Really liked this piece. Had me engaged and the use of some of the CSI commentary was not over done or boring. Well done. I would read this again. Thank you for sharing.
| schsrr chapter 63 . 8/1/2012
Ow thqt was a amazing story. Love them two
| TheTruthIsInsideOfYou chapter 63 . 4/2/2012
So I finally got around to reading this story and I have to say I loved it!
| spyffy chapter 63 . 3/1/2012
Nice final chapter, finished off a great story so well. I liked how you tied things up by killing off both Sam and Eddie, when Sara went to see Eddie I knew he was going to do something stupid lol. I liked how you had Sara taking responsibility for er actions and setting things right. I loved the little snap shot of Cath and Sara at the end and Sara's new job, awesome. :D
| CSIfanatic chapter 63 . 2/28/2012
Epic story, I enjoyed it a lot.
I love the ending.
| Harley Quinn Davidson chapter 63 . 2/27/2012
love it and can not wait for more
| Necrovore chapter 63 . 2/26/2012
Gonna be kinda weird to know this will no longer be popping up on alerts for me, but certainly a nice place to end it. I should probably get around to watching CSI at some point to actually see the characters whom I have been following in this story for such a long time. :P
| Spikesagitta chapter 63 . 2/26/2012
Wow. I never saw that coming. That Eddie would shoot Sam first! ...still nice of him to do so :P
So, it's a happily ever after for Sara and Cathrine then :)