Reviews for Monitor Duty
Karene chapter 2 . 6/26/2007
This had to have had some of the best dialogue I've ever read!

The section here had me downright guffawing with laughter! Very clever! :D


"You're one to talk with that uniform of yours!"

She looked at him with a frown."What is wrong with it?It is strong and functional..."

Flash replied, amused,"Yeah,you believe that,god bless you."

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On a side note: Poor Bruce. :(
chloecipher chapter 2 . 6/20/2007
Good job! I hope to read Chapter 3 soon.
Kipling Bunny chapter 1 . 6/16/2007
It's good so far. I hope you update it. :)
chloecipher chapter 1 . 6/8/2007
This story is great. Will there be other chapters?
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