marvelous story :)

Awesome! Totally Awesome! I love the comment about Jack and Gibbs looking proud enough to burst buttons of their shirts. My dad says that; being proud enough to bust his buttons. And of course they very well should be proud! McGee was great! Terrific! and incredably brave! He and Daniel are alike in that respect! Shy and quiet, but darn near impossible to get rid of!

Thank you for the story. Tracy

Liked this up until it's revealed that Jack and Sam are married. I don't remember anything being said about this being any kind of romance and you didn't categorize it that way. Too bad. I really wanted to like it.

The best way to describe this story is sloppy. The writing itself mixed tenses and had several spelling and grammer errors. The story itself had a few non-canon things that seemed wrong, and several inconsistencies, especially with SG-1. The plot could have been good but was exceedingly poorly done. Overall, a good idea poorly executed. I'm not saying you should stop writing or anything like that, but keep trying instead.

so far my only complaint is that Carter is an Astrophysicist. simply saying "she likes to blow things up" is degrading. other than that- great!

Good story, good ending!

I think it'ld be a good Idea because I like both Diagnosis murder and Ncis.

I wish more people would write NCIS crossovers with Stargate.

I have only read chapter 1 and it was pretty good so far!

Thanks

wait did you tell us what the warning was?

Anyway, it was a good chapter. Very interesting. Update soon!

Another good chapter!

great,keep going, more please.

Hey great story ,I like the way SG1 and NCIS work together!Hope there is more soon!

Please update soon! I love the idea behind this crossover and the story is really good! Keep writing!

Great chapter! More Please! Thanks