Reviews for Harry Potter and The Ancient's Bane
CrazedGammaMan1721 chapter 2 . 1/12
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CrazedGammaMan1721 chapter 1 . 1/12
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Macilnar chapter 23 . 7/18/2016
I hope Lorne is dishonorably discharged for this stunt. This chapter marks the second time his arrogance has almost resulted in the Expedition being destroyed. While his initial reaction to Jason's claim was perfectly justified, but the level of incompetence he displayed in having Jason stunned without even asking why Jason was modifying the shield is in excusable. Lorne had no way of knowing what would happen by abruptly cutting Jason's control of the city. Hell, given the other fail safes the Ancients put in place it wouldn't be unreasonable to think that the person controlling the city being hit by a WRAITH weapon could have triggered a self destruct protocol. Again his reaction to Jason's initial claim was fine, but having Jason stunned without question is an unacceptable level of incompetence. This is only slightly mitigated by the fact that men Lorne sent exercised an even greater degree of incompetence by failing to relay what Jason told them. That they didn't bother to forward what could have been critical information to their superior officer demonstrates a severe lack of judgment on their end. While Jason isn't completely without blame, the greater problem was Lorne's utter failure in dealing with a potential threat to the city followed by compounding this with his response to Jason's actions during the battle.
A'Lee'Ray chapter 23 . 2/16/2016
Love it you need to post the next chapter soon I'm living in suspense!
grovepjp chapter 23 . 1/4/2016
Tx
jgood27 chapter 23 . 12/20/2015
Love this story and can't wait to read more
Asherit chapter 23 . 12/2/2015
It is sad you stopped wrigting this story, it was so great...
Hikari Nova chapter 5 . 3/13/2015
so ya started the startgate program between 85 and 92 instead of the cannon 95{ra killed}/97{they started exploring the gate network}
Guest chapter 1 . 2/10/2015
just ANOTHER ABANDONED story
chaoswizard chapter 23 . 1/25/2015
Keep it coming plz
monbade chapter 23 . 12/11/2014
good story, any more?
bigfan22 chapter 23 . 11/18/2014
Man...I can't believe this story has been abandoned. It was probably the best SGA crossover I've read. The writing was excellent, and I love the badass scenes that Harry has against the Wraith. The character development between Jason and John and Jason and James was really well done. After so many years of nothing, I doubt we'll suddenly get an update, but I hope one day you will have the time to come back and finish this amazing story. Great job!
kitty chapter 23 . 10/22/2014
I really liked this story. A shame it was abandoned. Since its been 6 years since it was updated
I guess it wont be now. :(
Fuyutaro son chapter 6 . 9/16/2014
you never explained why she doesn't like jason.
DragonKnight1775 chapter 23 . 7/28/2014
Omg this is such an amazing story I really hope you add more
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