Reviews for Gone
Swanseajill chapter 1 . 6/6/2007
Alec brushing off the fact that Max thought he could commit murder bothered me too. The fact that she was such a cow in that ep bothered me too, but I guess you can forgive her as Logan was dying at the time. I liked the thought processes Max goes through in the first half of this chapter, how she works herself into anger with Alec for letting her down and then puts the wall up, refusing to even consider there may have been extenuating circumstances.

Can't wait to see where you go next with this.
Sera and Tails chapter 1 . 6/6/2007
Glad you took on an AU to "Hello, Goodbye" 'cause I always felt Alec brushed that 'killer' comment off too quickly as well. And hey, it's a great opportunity for angst :)

Concrit: "Of coarse he is." 'Course' not 'coarse.' [Damn our computers, can't they auto-correct phonetic errors too! ;)]

Cheers,

Sera
purplebunnywabbit chapter 1 . 6/6/2007
This is fabtansticular... or something like that.

I really, really like this. Gonna have some more angsty goodness right? Oh please tell me it will... I need my fix... :D
Crogos chapter 1 . 6/6/2007
Ah! Fantastic beginning, I'm hooked! Can't wait to see where you're going with this story. Update soon!
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