Reviews for A Boy in the Mirror
James Birdsong chapter 1 . 5/21/2015
Maybe a cool story.
stallion-ponyta chapter 1 . 5/24/2011
interesting, didnt think of it that way, loved use of emotion
Ghostwriter chapter 1 . 5/24/2010
Cool. Catch ya on the flip side.
Dgxuruend chapter 1 . 2/27/2009
good story
Jack Mitchell chapter 1 . 8/4/2008
It's alright, but it is a bit repetitve with Bastian's gulping. Needs a bit of re-write, but it's not too bad.
Ryan Brooklyn chapter 1 . 6/25/2008
Wow, only one review? This oneshot was very interesting and well done. I did not catch any spelling mistakes (which is good) and the transitions between Atreyu's thoughts and those of Bastian were smooth and easy to read and understand. The italics helped. Very good job convaying the thoughts and emotions of these two characters. Well done. :-D
hehehe08 chapter 1 . 7/7/2007
Very well done! It's never easy to capture the feelings of these two characters, as everything in the movie is so...magical! Great job nonetheless, you really kept me reading. Nice switch between the two, as it was a smooth reading.