Reviews for Fairytales
Shubhs chapter 3 . 9/8/2009
“What I?” should be "What about me?", "Actually, I believe you, too, Hinata-sama, are to take part?” should be "Actually I believe that Hinata-sama is to take part as well.", “Obito, look at my life now. Isn’t it great? I mean, all my students...surpassing the Sannin!“ should be “Obito, look at my life now. Isn’t it great? I mean, all my students are surpassing the Sannin!“... Correct these slight mistakes and when you write a story read it through before you post it or spell check it...I know that its pissing off but you should make sure that your story has no grammatical errors and all the spellings are correct!Still LOVED the story though!XP XD XD XD XD
Kageriah chapter 3 . 4/19/2009
Wow! I really like this story!
BananaphoneBob chapter 3 . 3/28/2009
Seriously, I LOVE the way you write! It's so ... wow ... I should really stop using that word ... well anyway, I LOVED this! I love that kind of future, it's just so ... aww! D

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HoliMoliCow chapter 3 . 3/18/2009
-SQUEAL- loved it! keep writing! D
fyerigurl chapter 3 . 7/5/2008
Nice... :D I like the almost poetry format. :D
Xanie chapter 2 . 3/13/2008
The 'You are my brother my best friend forever' thing, did you get that from American idol or something?
Xanie chapter 3 . 3/13/2008
OMG. That was STUNNING! I love it! The italicized (especially the NejiTen part :D) were extra special as well..
NorthernLights25 chapter 3 . 3/12/2008
I loved it!
ish.the.abstract chapter 3 . 3/12/2008
i love it...a happy ending that doesn't go out of character...amazing
Laura-chan chapter 3 . 3/11/2008
That was nice and interesting :D Not very original, but I liked the introspection
ish.the.abstract chapter 2 . 3/9/2008
very good..i like the whole fairytale concept

you managed make the characters believeable, nice writing style too
fyerigurl chapter 1 . 2/20/2008
I like it.
Kyrie Dalheim chapter 1 . 10/25/2007
that's awesome! will you be continuing this?
hellbunnyxxx chapter 1 . 6/7/2007
Wow! I really like this fic! please continue it soon!

Gonna add this story to my Story Alert list

besos!