Reviews for Version of Fate Series
Bijnaam chapter 6 . 7/10/2013
I don't know if you're still writing or not but I just wanted to say, the ending of this chapter really made it for me. I'm not fond of stories OCs in shows like Kim possible, with just a wide variety of characters but I really love this chapter. I like a lot of stories, and I read this one a while ago, before I had a FF account, and I fell in love. Rereading it just reminds me that this is one of my all time favourite chapters out of any story I've ever read.
KeiHime013 chapter 11 . 5/8/2012
Soooo, what happened to Shego in the months after Kim lost her baby? What other secrets is Lanica privy to? How did Kim get pregnant?
Jen chapter 11 . 4/5/2011
Loved it.:)
zamzowwow chapter 11 . 1/18/2010
Well done. I think a more realistic telling of how things would go if Shego and Kim became story drew me in and the characters were ones I came to care was also a story where yoy didn't know how things would go,usally those are the best kind for me. So once again BRAVO(load applause).
Kay8abc chapter 11 . 12/13/2009
Very nicely done. i love it. especially your added characters.

-kate
ShadowCub chapter 11 . 7/24/2009
Lanica and Kelli , irked me more than

Shego and Kim cheating together.

Ron who cares, he's the friend whose always there always! You can't get rid of him with dynamite,with the constant sidekick, if she goes to the toilet he's already there. And once again I go off the deep end ..sorry. I like it.
Ryukashy chapter 11 . 6/23/2009
Wonderful story! Really sad during some chapters, but it really touched me. I'm only sad for the poor Ron, who at the end is the only one who ended this story with all his bones cracked and without any reason to be happy again. However I've liked very much this story and it'll go for sure in my favourites. You've developed very well the Kigo's relationship and Lanica is a great character. The only thing that I didn't understand is the passage where Lanica switch from feeling guilt for Kim's miscarriage to being angry with her. But it's only a minor thing and maybe I didn't understand exactly (sometimes my english fails, eheh).

Fantastic story! Keep writing!
yui1808 chapter 11 . 9/14/2008
oh... a happy ending... thanks for posting... i had fun reading and feeling the emotions here...
yui1808 chapter 6 . 9/14/2008
so sad...
yui1808 chapter 5 . 9/14/2008
oh such a nice friend but do you guys think that tolerating kim and shego's relationship was an act of being a nice friend and the right thing to do? sometimes it just get very confusing.., whether to support your friend's wrong deed or come up with the truth that will eventually hurt someone or some people... this story's very realistic... the tension and the drama are real...
yui1808 chapter 3 . 9/14/2008
ph s**t that was sad... i feel the pain they're in... good job author for bringing out the emotions in them...
Jonz chapter 11 . 7/2/2008
When I reached the 8th chapter of this the question that popped into my terrible-reviewer mind was "Shall I review this or not?"

Then I reached the end and noticed your pen name. Have to say I kinda fell in love with it ;)

I don't know how this review will reach you since you published all this ages ago, but I really liked your story and how you took control of your characters :)

Well, I'm off to see what else you have written P

Thanks for keeping me hooked for a whole afternoon,

A
skye.angel05 chapter 11 . 7/1/2008
cool story. very dramatic and angsty (i guess) but it all seemed very real. i was imagining lanica to be kinda like monique though
AudioErotica chapter 11 . 9/22/2007
Would like to give my kudos to a wonderful story. This is one of the very very few stories I have read twice because I liked it so much. It gave way to a lot of sexual tension, passion, longing, and love. I truly appreciate how this story is focused entirely on Kim and Shego's relationship. There are no destroy the world plots, no missions, no villains, just the internal struggle of two people in love trying to work through their circumstances of their relationship. Even the added characters were comfortable to read as they did assisted in the Kim and Shego working through their feelings. I also enjoy the fact that there were no significant changes to the their careers. Shego was still a villain, Kim was still the hero. This really gave a wonderful look at a possible Kim's future personal life outside her heroic endeavors. Your story is very much appreciated!
CastaS chapter 11 . 9/17/2007
Great story, i enjoyed it.
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