Reviews for Miscalculation
Guest chapter 9 . 5/20
Loved it!
ACorf chapter 9 . 5/8
This was very well done. I enjoyed the characters and the story. You made them seem like real people.
zfj chapter 9 . 3/27
Loved it. I'm glad you kept Yamcha a good guy.
Sea Wan River chapter 3 . 3/2
you might want ask yourself 'Do I really need to explain this?' sometimes. The "Obviously, she was misinterpreting his indignant expression, etc" didn't need to be there. we get it. Also love the P&P misinterpreting things vibe
Sea Wan River chapter 1 . 3/2
fun chapter
Sea Wan River chapter 1 . 3/2
great first chapter
Ignis Draconem chapter 9 . 3/20/2016
honestly, vegeta and bulma are my favorite couple in dbz, gohan and videl a close second, and i always tried making scenarios for how trunks was born and all, this fits perfectly
vegeta and future trunks chapter 4 . 3/17/2015
Ch4 is my favorite chapter! D This story was FREAKIN HILARIOUS, loved it, vegeta's inexperience with sex, the arguments between vegeta and bulma, & the lemons were all great stuff. Yamchaa dick, im happy bulma didnt get back with him. Loved how Bulma's mother predicted what was going to happen between bulma and vegeta at the end ;) I cant lie there were a lot times within the story where vegeta would piss me off real bad with the things he would say to bulma :/
Guest chapter 9 . 2/12/2015
Yaaay! Loved it loved it loved it!
Fiery Pixie Stik chapter 9 . 12/30/2014
This took me way back. I feel like I may have started reading this when it was first published and I just happened across it while looking up dbz fanfiction since watching dbz on Hulu lol. This was awesome. I loved it. Thank you for the nostalgia.
jj chapter 9 . 11/4/2014
that was great i love it nice job and excellent writing style
Guest chapter 7 . 9/28/2014
I'm sorry, but this chapter was boring.
jojo118016 chapter 1 . 9/25/2014
I friken love this story! It is so well written and the FEELS!.
LadyBardock chapter 9 . 8/27/2014
I really liked it :) Passionate and interesting story :)
SaVrAiNoiR chapter 4 . 8/14/2014
eeeee! This is a nice fanfic!
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