Reviews for In the Circle of Elemental Arms
amituofomiamigo chapter 1 . 1/3/2013
By the way, the last comment was left by me. I didn't realize I wasn't logged in. Thanks! :)
Guest chapter 25 . 1/3/2013
I read a lot of fan fiction. I guess you could say that's nothing special. And, like a lot of the rest of the world, I consider myself an avid reader and a pretty good at judging the quality of a story. It has been some many years since you've written this story, so I'm not sure if you'll even pay attention to this message but I wanted to tell you that this is the first time I've felt the need to write a long review to an author to commend their work. This is without a doubt one of the best stories I've read on here. I recently came to love Ouran High School Host Club, and I think you captured the essence of each character wonderfully. I couldn't get enough of each of your chapters and really enjoyed how you interwove Bisco Hatori's storyline and basic intent with the idea of elemency and your own plot. I know you stated in your disclaimer that the idea was not originally yours, but I really appreciate how you have managed to bring it to fruition. Your story was an absolute joy to read.
That said, there are some things I'd like to ask about. Where did your inspiration for Takumi come from? I felt like there may have been subtle references to another already existing character that I was not aware of. Though I liked his and Haruhi's interaction, I do not think I completely understood it.
Why is the Host Club's connection so much stronger than normal? By this, I mean that they have full-fledged telepathy, instead of the usual empathy. I was really looking forward to having that fleshed out. I know you mentioned that you had a few ideas for a sequel, and I beg you to act on them. This story is very good, but I feel it is yet unresolved, and there is so much potential for the Host club and this plot to grow. I'm willing to bet that you left some things open on purpose, and I can't help but wonder if you'll ever decide to tie up the loose ends. This is the only story that has instilled in me the need to push the author to keep writing. It is very good. I'm not sure how much you discuss your writing with readers on this site, but I implore you to continue to write on this arc and if there is anything I can do to encourage, inspire, or cajole you into continuing this story, please let me know as soon as possible.
Thank you for this wonderful work! I hope you keep writing, no matter the subject!
Sanna Rose chapter 1 . 1/2/2013
PLEASE CONTINUE THE STORY, OR MAKE A SQUEL, pleaseeeee? the story's reallyyyy gooddd!
Sanna Rose chapter 1 . 1/2/2013
Heiress of the Hyuuga chapter 1 . 12/8/2012
I loved this! I checked your profile, hoping there was a sequel and am saddened by the fact that there isn't :(. Please, please, please, please, please, please! Make a sequel!
mtnikolle chapter 11 . 12/8/2012
That was very beautifully written. I don't have the words to do it justice.
mtnikolle chapter 9 . 12/7/2012
This chapter was incredibly touching, and the recommended musical accompaniment was perfect.
Opinr chapter 25 . 11/29/2012
This story is great in the flow, langue and plot making this a tale of epic protains truly a great read my only regreat is I didn't find it sooner!
PassionandPromise chapter 25 . 11/27/2012
This is one of the most original stories I've seen in a long time! Thank you so much for a wonderful read, and your writing style is absolutely amazing! Please keep up the good work!
Dha Rason chapter 1 . 11/23/2012
great story i can see why this is the all time favorite
Whisper chapter 25 . 11/13/2012
This was the best Ouran fic I have ever read! :)
Obsidian Tigress chapter 25 . 11/4/2012
Loved it. You should turn this into a book. Names and stuff would have to be changed, but this was seriously book worthy
woodlandfairykirk chapter 25 . 10/15/2012
this is genius... especially how you made the characters fit their elements perfectly(:
Just Watch Me chapter 25 . 10/15/2012
Thank you so much for this story. I read it in a few hours, and I think it was one of the most creative things I've ever read.
LunaEchoWillow chapter 1 . 10/4/2012
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