Reviews for In the Circle of Elemental Arms
LoveableOkie chapter 22 . 12/25/2016
I really hate Haruhi in this. Which is weird because Haruhi is one of the few hetero ship fanfictions I'll read.
Skilvh and Shilvh chapter 25 . 12/20/2016
Captivating! Love this!
XD
sierra.steinbrecher chapter 21 . 11/17/2016
That last sentence made me sit up and take notice. Oh, poor Kasanoda.
sierra.steinbrecher chapter 18 . 11/17/2016
Did you get some of the idea for balances from Bleach Zanpakto? It sounds like a similar concept.
sierra.steinbrecher chapter 10 . 11/17/2016
Dang. I loved this chapter like crazy, especially the part where she was getting threatened and threw it back in his face. Dang, you make good OCs.
sierra.steinbrecher chapter 5 . 11/17/2016
I love her elemancy teacher. He seems really cool and a little tough, but a good combination. And the thought of all those girls playing nurse was really cute and funny!
abandoned accont chapter 25 . 11/14/2016
Oh my gosh. You have so much world building and I love seeing how the introduction of magic changed the purpose of the host club slightly. The politics around the circles is really interesting and how forging a circle gets controlled (and how that goes... A bit wrong).

You managed to do a serious take on a generally not serious series without mood whiplash, and you nailed all the characters while you were at it. This is such a great fic, thank you for writing it
Nalanaya chapter 25 . 10/21/2016
This was a great story in just about all aspects...except for the Takumi romance. I don't mind the idea of Haruhi hooking up with someone else, or her choosing them over the club, I just don't think it was done very well. Takumi went from 'scary older water elementalist' to 'gruff teacher-type' pretty smoothly but then I turned around and Haruhi's fantasizing him and getting romantic and he's returning it? WTF? Exempting the fact that he's quite a bit older than her, that behavior is really OOC for Haruhi and it seemed for him as well (who supposedly loves his own Circle). And then after she admitted hating him (and loving him gag) and supporting her own Circle over his, that somehow became she chose him over them? I'm sorry but that relationship just came out of nowhere with no basis other than a need for Drama.
I still don't really think the Sanano Circle was portrayed very well losing it and totally abandoning their ideals because the obviously fanatical group they knew well and hated did something dumb and hypocritical that supported their own agenda. But I can mostly accept that as IRL people do dumb things for worse reasons all the time.
Overall it was a great story, I just think a lot of the ending portion unnecessarily dramatized, and that detracted from the overall experience.
crystalraeb chapter 25 . 10/14/2016
I loved this story!
Kaira Fang'Heis chapter 25 . 8/31/2016
I remembered reading this a couple years ago. Then I went to look for it again. Now that I have read it all over again, I find it even more beautiful than in my memory. And have a feeling that I will probably read it again in a couple months or year, because this is my favourite AU story I've read about Ouran host club.

Thank you, for these hours of work. You created an explosion of emotions, made me feel things I would never imagined. I could immerge myself completely in this story and imagine the colours, sensations and scents you described.

This is a magical trip every time I read it. And I am up to make the trip again.

Thank you. :)
limegreenarcher chapter 3 . 8/21/2016
love love it! that action scene was AWESOME! Haruhi kicked butt!
limegreenarcher chapter 1 . 8/20/2016
I love this! its such a great concept and is written beautifully! thank you so much for explaining the honorifics, I get very confused
Arla Logan chapter 25 . 8/13/2016
I read your story from beginning to end and loved it:)
Boy Howdy chapter 1 . 7/25/2016
Don't worry about the three stories that are ahead of yours in reviews. They all suck and the reviews are mostly fakes written by the authors of those stories. That's pretty obvious. This story is actually worthwhile and well-written - not just some hormonal teenage girl's self-pleasuring fantasy with a Mary Sue as the main character. I'm pretty hard on writers but you've actually written a good story so don't mind the pretenders. Anyone who appreciates good fanfiction knows the truth about these things. This story and a handful of others on Page 1 are genuinely good and none of them have an OC mucking things up. Thank God!
Mokushiyami chapter 11 . 6/25/2016
Reading this story yet again for like the 20th time. It just gets better and better each time I read it. A true masterpiece of fanfiction. I'd love to see a new story from you, or an update(it's been almost 2 years since you've updated your profile).

Thank you for such an amazing story!
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