Reviews for True Jinchuriki
steph5000 chapter 2 . 6/6
Not a bad thing but you keep putting chakra as charka it can distract from the reading sometimes other than that it's really good so far
ivanganev1992 chapter 18 . 3/13
Ch 1u ,Orochimaru ,Akatsuki ,Pain ,Konan ,Sasori ,The Jashinists Hidan and Kakuzu and MADARA awaits .
ivanganev1992 chapter 11 . 3/13
Ch 11 . Anko was outcriticised because Orochimaru as her teacher ,Ahem Snake Lady ..
awefanfic chapter 20 . 9/18/2016
please update soon!what would happen now?
Blitzstrahl chapter 16 . 8/17/2016
seriously whats with the degrading quality in grammar?
Blitzstrahl chapter 15 . 8/17/2016
...The hell?
grammar and overall spelling took a dive...
Blitzstrahl chapter 2 . 8/17/2016
Just for a laugh.
Naruto- Ino
Sasuke dies alone
Lee-Sakura
DarkLightShade chapter 15 . 7/8/2016
When it says the Finnegan allows use of all six chakra types it's means the five basic elements and the gravity element which can only be used with the Finnegan.
SassySnowflake16 chapter 19 . 7/1/2016
you know what sakura is a fucking idiot
SassySnowflake16 chapter 18 . 7/1/2016
daaaaaaaaaaaaaaamn
SassySnowflake16 chapter 14 . 7/1/2016
omg those pranks were perfect
Clearmens chapter 20 . 2/20/2016
A delicious story! I have been looking to read a badass naruto story where he does not turn around and apologize to the 'criminals' who have harmed esp his team or teamates simply because 'he should not have been too harsh on them' This is the first with no such nonsense like kishimoto himself does in his fanboyism for the uchiha.

Thank you for a good story and yet deviating esentially from canon.
Well done.
Anticipating to read such good chapters. yes i love all of them perhaps the banshee could be a little more disciplined?! lol.
RainbowMaze chapter 2 . 9/15/2015
The story idea is really amazing, though there are a few things I don't like. One, Naruto was never attacked by any mobs in the real story. It gets on my nerves when people do that because then Naruto wouldn't want to become Hokage and would most likely not be as cheerful. Second, Naruto has a decent apartment that doesn't have peeling walls. Also, not everyone kicked Naruto out of stores. The only reason he only had ramen is because he was never forced to eat any healthy food, and he loves ramen. Just thought I'd clear a few things up. But other than that, this story is amazing. Keep updating!
Mermaid's Magic chapter 20 . 7/17/2015
I wonder what the Clan Heads thoughts where on Naruto's Speech to Gaara in the last chapter?
Guest chapter 7 . 7/2/2015
not yogito vote hinata
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