|Reviews for Lines|
| superfluoustorequirements chapter 1 . 11/13/2008
wow, you're deep!
this story's slightly amazing
bravo, and all that lovely jazz
| MeakoXIII chapter 1 . 7/18/2008
It's really hard to review and critique something like this. It's beautiful and powerful and different, and can't be looked at in the normal way. It's really good, and at the same time it makes you think, and try to understand things in a different way. Stories like this are why people read, because it reflects our inner-most thoughts that we have trouble expressing. And you do, so perfectly.
| hpsailorstarluver chapter 1 . 3/12/2008
I got really confused... I liked the ending a lot but in the middle it was really confusing. Other than that I really liked it :D Keep it up!
| tinparrot chapter 1 . 8/20/2007
Hey there. Not bad. I got a little confused as to what was going on in the middle, but otherwise really good. You have excellent description. Bravo