|Reviews for When We Were Young|
| Bunnylass chapter 1 . 11/5/2007
Aww, i really hope you do a sequel to this! Its awesome.
I love it.
They were so cute as children.
| fyd818 chapter 1 . 6/7/2007
Oh. My. Gosh. Sque!
I love this fic! I could see this entire thing happening in my mind as I was reading it. You caught the older Teyla and Ronon's voices very well as children - it was still them, but with that young innocence that children have. I loved that the first time Teyla ever saw Ronon she threw rocks at him - it was perfect! And Ronon's protectiveness over Teyla, even as they were children - I love that. I also liked how you put in that her locket disappeared in the cave - excellent piece of canon!
And the line "To this day, only Ronon knew the truth" gave me goosebumps. I'm still sitting here with chills up my spine, that is, I believe, the best line *ever.*
The ending was a fantastic way to wrap it all up. I wish they would do something like this in the show! Seriously, someone needs to send this to the writers - it's that good.
This was a beautiful fic, thank you so much for writing and sharing it! *zooms of to read again*