Reviews for Unexpected Love
An Impatient Pierce Fan chapter 25 . 10/22/2015
I just stumbled upon your story while bored at work. I am not totally opposed to K/J (though my OTP is K/D), and your take on it was very interesting. The twist of him living through his ordeal does make it more believable (I do wish you had included a little bit of what happened in the ordeal to change him). I enjoyed their interactions, and the story was well written. A little fluff never hurt anyone!

My only major complaint lies in the timeline. It all happens so fast, that I find it very out of character for Kel. I can totally she her forgiving Joren for his actions towards her, but remember what he put Lalasa through and how that ended. Would she forgive him eventually? Yeah, probably. It is just in her nature, but I think it would have taken a few months before she could even be on friendly terms with him.

All in all, I had fun reading this, and I am a little sorry to see you abandoned your K/D piece (I think that is a safe assumption after six years). Hope life is treating you well!
xoxoNoelle chapter 25 . 7/15/2014
aw, so cute! love this pairing
1009306 chapter 25 . 11/27/2011
I loved it! I really like the K/Js. Could u do an epilogue? Pwease?(with a cherry on top).
LabyrinthineTwilight chapter 25 . 2/23/2011
Loved it. I had never thought about them falling in love if he'd have lived.
lala chapter 25 . 1/28/2011
Its a wonderful story i loved it very much.
Aisie chapter 25 . 8/5/2010
This story was incredible! It could be a real book... it was written that well... bravo! :D
Sulia Serafine chapter 25 . 6/17/2010
I enjoyed the pace of the development of this story. What I can't stand is a thing drawn out too long or rushed like a manic frenzy. My hat's off to you, dearie. That was just right.
SarahE7191 chapter 24 . 4/19/2010
Only one chapter left!

Sarah
SarahE7191 chapter 23 . 4/19/2010
Love it.

Sarah
SarahE7191 chapter 22 . 4/19/2010
Aw
SarahE7191 chapter 21 . 4/19/2010
Uh oh
SarahE7191 chapter 20 . 4/19/2010
:-)
SarahE7191 chapter 19 . 4/19/2010
Love it.

Sarah
SarahE7191 chapter 18 . 4/19/2010
Men are so stupid.

Sarah
SarahE7191 chapter 17 . 4/19/2010
:'-(
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