Reviews for The Forbidden Love of the Sun and Moon
Jolteon of light chapter 20 . 10/13/2014
I don't care what you say, there must be a sequel!
TheCreeperSWE chapter 20 . 11/16/2013
Awesome story! Ive been trying to make a fanfic myself but my mind keep drifting to already existing ideas.. ;-)
TheCreeperSWE chapter 12 . 11/15/2013
I love the story but it starts to look a lot like the lion king plot. Kid runs away, parent dies, tyrant takes over.. i know it is very hard to come up with something new but please. Surprise me.
TheCreeperSWE chapter 7 . 11/15/2013
The real name for bat in swedish is fladdermus. Flädermus makes it seem like elderflowermouse! Love the story, it is great!
TheCreeperSWE chapter 3 . 11/15/2013
I laughed a lot at the name Senhora since if you put a space in there(Sen hora) it means late whore in swedish XD
TheCreeperSWE chapter 1 . 11/15/2013
Ovän i actually a swedish word that means that someone is not a friend ;-)
eeveeranger chapter 1 . 9/19/2013
how did u do that A in ovan's name
eeveeranger chapter 20 . 9/5/2013
i wonder what the next story is about hmph good luck
eeveeranger chapter 18 . 9/5/2013
wow it is a great story heh. oh please try to reply to me because i need some ideas for my book im
typing. please help me out! XD
Guest chapter 11 . 9/4/2013
ha for a king its your majesty and I'm sorry if I spelled majesty wrong
enyway this story is awesome.
anonymous chapter 8 . 8/7/2013
Swedish names? Most of then unheard of for me oh well i am younger :3
(yes i speak Swedish)
Poke Tekken Critic chapter 20 . 8/7/2013
OMGOSH! This was freaking amazing! I love it so much! It really needs a sequel
A confused geek chapter 8 . 8/2/2013
MAJOR PLOT TWIST! Loving it by the way
some guy chapter 7 . 4/24/2013
It's very tempting. about...a...uh...OH. I KNOW. Play with my younger sibling. They're really annoying
Brother-4 months
Tori panda 101 chapter 8 . 3/30/2013
oh nooooooooo! jua's parents noooo ovan is sooo evil! but the story is great! :)
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